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A Poem by What happened to simple old me?
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family relationship

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Sharp, my utterance fails.
All I hear is silence as I've run from your presence 
again, I cannot stop myself
I feel no want to be around.

Coldness calls in this house
the lack of want to call it my
solitude, protection I have
yet I do not feel it when I'm not alone.

Situation harrowing as I carry on paralysed 
from hope to hope, burnt down by my own mind,
letting no one in, nothing out
relapse keeps playing like a broken cassette.

vintage; this is how my story feels

© 2010 What happened to simple old me?


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I love how you wrote this. I LOVE the last line as well, Good job =]

Posted 14 Years Ago


i really like this write...i can almost relate to this feeling . good work(:

Posted 14 Years Ago



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What happened to simple old me?
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'Death was just a simple glance across a dim lit room And those eyes did it Those three words did it Those three words killed him And I surrender to it all Between you and me, I surrender to you .. more..

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