May Body Travel

About my aspiration to break out of the monotony of my life and do something I'm proud of.

I feel my bones creak,

my heart beating too fast.

There's that odd feeling on my cheeks,

the tightness of skin after tears dry.

I want to break out of my body,

leave the broken and beat-up parts behind.

I must carry my nerve-endings away,

to a place my past can't find me.

Author's Note

Please don't be critical - just constructive criticism.

Reviews

[Plexiglass]

At the moment I absolutely relate to this poem. Well done.

[Emily Irene.]

Thank you! Glad I could find someone to relate it to.

[Jamie]

Such a powerful piece of work! I am sure we have all felt doing this at sometime or another! Great work!

[Emily Irene.]

Thank you!

[Jamie]

You're welcome :) Feel free to review my stuff :)