It is not much to be envied. this business of ignoring now. What misplaced concept of nobility could mortify a self and thus attain largesse, of sacrifice? --all time assigned to glean leftover thought is wasted as a lost forever.
Here is the Olympic yielded moment! --and golden posted rainbows fade before it. Alas, the moment makes for choices, while a wish may have its non-reality, a pitiable portion of a soul behind a darkened mirror scraping bits of self that dried in winds from yesterday.
And so to build a fortress for a dream boldly gazing forth in periscopic purpose now secure, for pondering is safely tucked away outside among the sleeping lions, and inspiration far beyond the pale. No...no need for dreaming, only stroking... Even restlessness is tired. So very...tired. ~
I am so guilty as I read this! Dean, the Olympic yielded moment dangles and dangles, just out of reach. I am reminded to live in this moment. Take this moment! Restlessness is so damn tired. It is strange, I feel like you have crawled inside of me to write this piece. So strange. Angi~
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
No guilt intended. We all get restless for truth.
Inside you, eh? Hm...dark in here...but v.. read moreNo guilt intended. We all get restless for truth.
Inside you, eh? Hm...dark in here...but very nice!
While it's a positive emotion and revitalizing to revoke past memories of achievements, acquaintances and accolades gone by, I agree with the general hypothosis that this poem suggests, time is precious and tomorrow is promised to no man ( or woman ) ! So don't sit around too long dwelling about it!
An evocative and stirring read good sir, enjoyable !
Very profound poetry. Yes, to live for the future, to build your life around what may or may not happen many years from now, is a terrible waste. The moment is now, spend it or lose it, and how many moments can any of us afford to lose? I now write tanka, a Japanese form poetry, that celebrates the moment. It is a form that invites you to always live for now and not for tomorrow - which may never come. Thanks for this poem, it is a great one.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks, much. I'm now off to have a look at yours.