A Gift for You

this is to my fiance who is always there when i need him.

Here's my Heart. Lock and Key.

To you I give this precious gift.

Treat it right and keep it whole.

It hold my secret for you to know.

Hold it close and keep it safe.

For it's been broken many times before.

But you i trust with all my worth.

So don't prove me wrong.

Like other have.

i trust in you to keep me whole.

You are my anchor and my safety.

This gift is an honor.

Something to be proud of.

Don't take it and hurt me.

But take it and love me.

I give it to you because you show me love, trust, safety and equality.

So heres my Heart. Lock and Key.

 

Author's Note

This is what he shows me

Reviews

[Andrew - Moon Fixer]

This is nice, but the flow has a little trouble. and i'm sorry i don't have a enough time right now to tell you why, do me a favor and reread it and see what i'm talking about and then ask me to review it again when i have more time.
thank you Moon fixer

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Crazy with imagery and shock emotion, well done, great read.

[quinfinn]

this is intense and filled with trust and beauty. wonderfully and personally expressed. very good write!

[Daydreamer54]

Aw, it's so sweet. When you love someone, you give them to power to break ur heart,but you trust them not to.