Last Resort

Last Resort

A Poem by Sylo's Rose

Running

 

Fighting

 

Panic

 

Runnig through the forest try to elude Death

 

Fighting. Myself for control

 

Panicing because the control is slipping

 

Death

 

Distruction

 

Last Resort

 

Lose of conrtol mean emidate death

 

But before Death comes Distruction

 

The Last Resort

 

Chains, cages, and Death.

 

Cornered.

 

Go in for the kill

 

My last resort.

 

Kill a human

 

Then die by the fangs of the Pack

 

Death by family is better then Death by a two legger.

 

My Last Resort

© 2011 Sylo's Rose


Author's Note

Sylo's Rose
Tis the life of a wolf

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Dark and lustful to the point of grating reason, well done, great read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


WOW! amazing wonderful poem very dark and an interesting idea

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very very epic. Love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


COOL most people dont even try to understand the point from a wolfs view. I think (if i count) you did a great job showing that view. NICE job!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this because it sounds tense! Another great write from you! ^^

Posted 13 Years Ago


okay. i under stand a few things now, but it did get confusing. I understand that death by the pack or caged by humans. but there were some things that confused me. for example. (But before Death comes Distruction) I did not under stand this. it seemed out of place. yea distruction does not need to be in there. take a look at it and maybe you can see what i mean plus, another area. take a look at this. ( Fighting. Myself for control) i think you may not need the period in there. i t needs a little work but it's good.
Thank you moon fixer

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it was getting good then stoped. where is the rest? or did i miss some thing?

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Sylo's Rose

Neverland, OR



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I'm a littel wolf lost in the big forest :( But I love to play and hunt and hang out with my pack mates. I also looooooveeeee to write. Thats why im here. To make friends and share my writings :) more..

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