Last Howl

I don't know if we hunted each other

 

Or....

 

If they hunted us...

 

But we always found each other on Howl Hill

 

Weather we were fighting

 

Or....

 

Weather we were talking

 

Or....

 

Fighting.

 

We always found a way to be near each other.

 

As I ran to the top of Howl Hill To see if you'd be there

 

i found your body lying there bleeding.

 

The howl I let out was the last howl of mine to ever leave Howl Hill

Reviews

[DontBlink158]

wow, it was magical

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

haunting............chilling and heartbreaking

[Emily B]

whether, not weather, I think . . .

[Daydreamer54]

Aw, this was an epic poem. U should write ur own wold story! ^^
weather-whether

[Silent Knight]

Its nice. And sad. Good job.

[quinfinn]

magnificent, and done on your own, guess you didn't need my suggestions. good for you! very nice piece!

[FantasyWriter01]

I can see why Writer's Block hit you! Hmm, try going into more detail and maybe say who "we" is. Pretty good start, you'll get there! Also, say who "they" is.
Maybe make these two meet up on Howl Hill and describe how there adversaries, or something? Maybe describe a talk or a fight? Your choice, those are just some ideas. Keep up the great work!