Beauty

Beauty crowds me till i die

 

Sufficating me with its perfectness

 

Perfect hair

 

Perfect nails

 

PErfect bot

 

Perfect girl

 

Beauty I lack

 

Love I have

 

You can have all the beauty in the world and no love

 

And you can have al the love in the world and no beauty

 

Beauty isn't so beautiful now is it?

Author's Note

everything isnt perfect

Reviews

[Emily B]

beauty is in the eye of the behoder, or the eye of the storm . . . always fun to mix metaphors

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

beauty is as it does and the beauty that is inside is the most exquisite kind.

[Sweet Little Bunny]

a very powerful poem. nicely put together.

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

not all people who are beautiful do not find love. and anyways everyone is beautiful in their own ways

[Deactivated_BurningDemo..]

Love surpasses everything. Beauty, time, everything. You say this perfectly.

[Dream Weaver]

Enough said...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Ah how we strife and never find perfection, only i the one we love, well written, good read

[Silent Knight]

Love can surpass beauty, age, and whatever else. If you love somebody for how they look, that is selfish and stupid. You show this perfectly in this poem. Good job.

[quinfinn]

i adore the way you play with words and turn phrases with this one, it is quite clever and very appealing. very nice write!

[Tasha]

wow Sylo, this was absolutely amazing! you did a fabulous job.