To Her

Something I wrote while thinking about the one I love.

I have a dark side.

It breathes black flame laced with crimson and as it flies through my mind it’s jagged claws scratch deep welts through my happiest memories.

It frightens the kind words from my lips and twists my actions into those of it’s own image.

It sets fire to my thoughts. Viscous, blazing infernos that tear through everything I am that I want or ever will be.

And she sits in the middle of those flames, untouched by their rage, calm and unafraid. She walks through the gaps in my personality like a staircase. Deeper down she walks, deeper into the cave where it sleeps.

And it sees her. And she sees it, and doesn't flinch. And she calms it. She soothes it with her beauty and silences it’s flames with her words. She soothes it, and it sleeps.

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[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Its very deep, ill give you that.
Although I don't quite get the meaning to it.
I think you are trying to say that she destroys the darkness around you and every demon that haunts you. She makes everything ok and makes you feel safe.
If thats what you are trying to say, im glad I get it haha, and in that case I love the way you have written it out.
Great write full of emotion and depth.
The best poems always come from our hearts :)

[Javan]

Yeah, that's exactly what I was trying to say! :D
Thanks for the reviews! :D

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

you are more than welcome :)
Yay I did understand it than :)

[Javan]

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