Pocket Full of dreams

I put my dreams in a pocket
The way jewels are kept safe in a closet,
For dreams in my pocket
Cannot be displayed
To be wearing it on my neck as a locket!

Dreams are fragile,
And to achieve them is like
Walking barefooted thousand miles,
Passionate desire is all you need
For living your dreams which cannot be fulfilled
By any greed,

Dreams if not hidden could be
Crushed by the ill
So make sure your dreams are all hidden and sealed

Good always have to play fair,
But bad never have to care

With the soul purpose of crushing the dreams of a good,
Bad plays all its trick like a hood

That is why I put my dreams in a pocket,
Instead of displaying them like a locket!!

Reviews

[Dash the Reaper]

Dreams are fragile,
And to achieve them is like
Walking barefooted thousand miles,
Passionate desire is all you need



I like that part the most,yah we do need to keep on having hope for our dreams otherwise we end up abandoning them..nicely done and welcome

[Syeda Afreen]

Glad that you could relate and thank you for your review!! :)

[Inject Positivity]

Excellent!! This one truly presents a profound message here... Dreams are must be kept hidden but always cherished with care, they are not for showing up to the world but for our personal happiness and achievement... Your 2nd stanza of the poem really stands out for me... Well done...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[tlhisler]

It's so great. I connected to it on a personal level especially here:

Dreams if not hidden could be
Crushed by the ill
So make sure your dreams are all hidden and sealed

Many people may mean well but when someone doesn't understand how dear your dreams are to you. Growing up, I was taught to think more practically (work with your strength) and writing or anything involving creativity was frowned upon.
Very good

[Syeda Afreen]

That was exactly what I was trying to convey through this poem.It feels great when someone figure out the core meaning without having an explanation :)

Thank you and keep leaving feedbacks like this.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

wow, true very true, dreams have this magic in them that make them so real and so valuable to us, though no one can see the dreams of others it doesnt matter to them because they will still pursue it. very good writing, I wrote a story similar to this topic its called Dreamer maybe you will find an interest in it, its about a boy who couldnt stop dreaming of bad things that became reality until one day he dreamt of his death ending all dreams given to him, wanting to change its outcome is his journey. let me know

[Syeda Afreen]

I am so glad that you liked it and Yes!I'd indeed like to read your story as well.Anything about dreaming is always fascinating and I am sure so will this story will be :)
Thank you.

[DEEP]

This is awesome.....u.r very good

[Syeda Afreen]

Thank you ,If you think so :)

[mou]

It is true.the most valuable things , always have a anxiety to be gone. Then we become more caring about it. well penned.

[Syeda Afreen]

That's human nature and that's how it works :)
The more we value that thing the more is the fear of losing that thing at the same time

[Akib Irfan]

This is Amazing !! U r very talented stranger :)

[Syeda Afreen]

Thank you so much Akib :)

[Saswati Deb]

Hey! It's such a cute one! N welcome to write's cafe!

[Syeda Afreen]

Thank you :) came here looking for you :P

[Saswati Deb]

Lol!! My love

[Syeda Afreen]

😂😂😂😂 ILY