Soul Crusher

                        Soul Crusher

 

 

You lied to me from trust,

Showed me to your cold,

Broken are these pieces,

That used to be my soul,

 

You used to say, I love you,

I felt you used to care,

You took away my sanity,

Now broken pieces bare,

 

I am weak for strength is gone,

You drained my of myself,

You snatched away an empty heart,

Broke it of it’s shelf,

 

You killed all the love we shared,

Annihilated my dreams,

You took all the love I had,

With all your selfish screams,

 

 

 

 

So as I lay here dying,

Breathing my last breath,

Quickly take the heart that’s yours,

Buried beneath my chest,

 

Reviews

[karmic]

Pretty good, but i wonder who is it about. Like what Rain said i understand this pain too. Again good job.

[Arthur Crow]

You bleed a lush river of anguish here... the force of your words is greatly felt.

Very well scribed and presented!

[*Rain*]

Wow. I do understand the pain. It sadly, is sometimes, a good thing. Hurt can in its own way heal.