I Know A Ghost.

...review plz

Everything dies out

The roses turn black

You snatched away my heart

And now I want it back.

Lost inspiration

As the walls cave in

Lost all hope

As I'm overtaken by sin.

You don't understand

This just feels like a game

Its not fault

He's to blame.

For rejecting me

For not caring

And here I am

Who can't stop staring.

Invisibility isn't a superpower

But its what I seem to be

Like a ghost

You see right through me.

Author's Note

review plz.!!

Reviews

[Keriun]

I'm sorry, but I overuse the black rose thing to the point I find it boring now... Or maybe its just me. Ha.

Everything seemed good except for "invisibility isn't a superpower" because it just somehow threw me off the track lol.

[Dev]

This is really very expressive.. I mean often when someone hurts you and ignores you , you actually feel as though your voice gets lost in the wind and people can see through you.. Very well written

[ProseAspiration]

Aww, this was pretty nice. You managed to stir up a few familiar feelings while i read this and when ever someone can do that with their words, they've really succeeded as a writer. =)