Here We Are

hmm, not sure this one even makes sense...?

Here we are

Underneath the stars

Here together

Counting forever

 

Watching the planets

In orbit pass by

The moon and sun aligned

With this love,

We don't even have to try

 

As I lay here with you

This feeling is true

Underneath the stars

Here we are.

 

Author's Note

like i said, im not even really sure this one makes sense to anyone but me. haha, help?

Reviews

[Gregory H.]

I liked this...However I lacked energy...A wise guy told me that you should read your poems aloud...It sometimes help...It doesn't need a format, But formats help the reader understand where your coming from...Hope this review helped...God Bless.

[snapstache]

i agree with sharkapillar...poems dont have to make sense!
As long as the feeling is there then it makes a great poem!!
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[Sharkapillar]

It doesn't have to make sense. Poetry is what you make it. It doesn't have to be readable to anyone else, it's simply a heartfelt piece of writing. You don't have to format it for readers.
~Blessed Be~