Under

I dig my toes into the wet sand

Water knee deep

Sky dark, the whole worlds asleep.

I think about you

If you might miss me

They said I was wrong

They will see.

The ocean whispers my name

Calling me deeper

Water up to my neck now

Soon to be an eternal sleeper.

I think about my friends

I will never see them again

But I can't take this anymore

I need to go.

Now I'm under

As I let my breath go

I see your face

And i whisper, "No"

Reviews

[Keriun]

Aye this was wonderful, like a movie scene! The ending part was strong and made me imagine the camera zooming in her opening eyes as she whispered that. I like potential suicide songs for some reason. I like things sad xD

[snapstache]

ahhhh! love it!!
Soo cute i thot this was the epic one...