Just once more

A poem about growing up and giving up

I Know it is wrong,

Look through the pictures,

Singing this sad song,

Feeling more than A flicker,

I miss the touch,

I long for that warmth

Much too much,

On my way heading north,

If i could hear the sound of snow fall again,

To be back in those moments of being innocent,

If I could go back to being that silly girl again,

Long before the incident,

To go back to my old home,

Just once more to feel it all,

Reviews

[Jordan]

I like the poem... it gives a sense of sadness while reading...

[Sami Khalil]

"being that silly girl again,

Long before the incident,




To go back to my old home,

Just once more to feel it all,"

We do learn from the past and putting things in the right perspective...Bravo