Don't

Don't cry,

Tears only drain you.

Don't create pain,

It will only mask the true hurt for a little while.

Don't feel worthy of blame,

His death was not out of spite.

Don't end your life,

Remember you have purpose.

Through the tears,

The pain,

The confusion,

The doubt,

Stay strong.

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Ending your life is never the solution and it's always hard to see others around you going through such tough times. All we can do is be there for them when they need someone...don't ever abandon them...or yourself in the process. We must stay strong and show that we are able to achieve anything we want...and no matter what we go through, we all deserve support and love.

[Lovecraft]

It's a decent poem, all it needs is a bit of editing. The first four stanza's should have more comma's and less periods.

I can sense a potential here, a dark potential, which I like. I myself am a very dark poet, trust me. Don't be afraid to be darker and edgier.

Overall, a fairly good job, Sydney. :)

The more poems you write, the better poet you will become. So just keep on going.

[LastMonth]

Less of a poem, more a letter. Directed at someone who is clearly very important to you.
This doesn't take away from this in any way.

A bit too short for me to judge on a technical level, but the sincerity in this did not go unnoticed.

[Sydney Fredrick]

Thank you for the review. :) I agree it is more of a letter...I wish there were more catagories to classify writings on the website.

And yes it is quite short. I cut many things out of it because I thought they weren't as relevant to what I was writing about and who I was writing to. :)

[LastMonth]

A kind thing to do, I'd say.
I hope this person knows how much you admire them.
I feel as though they need it.

[??????]

Very encouraging words:) Well done:)

[Sydney Fredrick]

Thank you very much! :)

[??????]

Your very welcome:)