A map of my headspace

A map of my headspace

A Poem by CollapsedThoughts


What sea is this

what oceans midst

am i traveling through

my feet slow kissed

by the shallow tide

the earth’s sweet ride

through the starry naught

makes me comply

my aimlessness

a blurry mess

an old complacency

i bless

a vast expanse

an orange romance

i can see forever

this slow tide’s dance

sand and water

sun and daughter

sky blur swirls

and the planet’s potter

my pensive escape

this the landscape

of my mind

my thoughts take shape

© 2012 CollapsedThoughts


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This is really nicely written; I like your use of language :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on July 3, 2012
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CollapsedThoughts
CollapsedThoughts

Miami, FL



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