Poet's Pensivity

In the grander scheme of life's perplexities

poets are but provocateurs of the mundane,

melodramatically capturing what transpires

between contradictions of an enigmatic dance,

the subtleties of coherently reasoned breaths

and eccentricities' final prosaic bemusement

Reviews

[Perdition]

Am NOT..haha..You've sorta summed it up quite well...I gotta start writing that less is more thing and see if it works so well as yours.." the subtleties of coherently reasoned breaths"...almost dialed up the desperation of my every day in one slashing line and snap..nice. Thanks..enjoyed it!

[Einstein Noodle]

sometimes ... sometimes its what we do .. but i would argue we elevate the mundane (or try to) and capture truth emotively ;) the last 3 lines tweak me noodle, Sybil .. the in "between...enigmatic dance" and "..coherently reasoned breaths" ... brilliant says i! simply brilliant ... a transcendental "G" spot (oo i'm going to have to save that for my next poem!) :))))
E.