Stardust Machinations

Unused spaces of an oblivious sky

staring into an untouchable void, 

souls of stardust and slumber's finale

contemplated northward subdued light,

within the silken machinations shadowed

of fractured promises and escaped dreams

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

hmmmmmm such a lost feeling to this says i! "..souls of stardust" .. "...silken machinations.." fine imagery and contrast .. i like the nebulous quality of this poem .. i do feel myself drifting in space .. perhaps waiting to be born .. like in "2001 A Space Odyssey" ..thanks for sharing my friend .. see you around eh!?
E.