Pizzicato

Pizzicato

The wind plucks the strings of the night

as the weeping willows whisper

in the ear of the dark~

Not jaded by the rain nor the drought of love

I wait for the shadow of a stranger

to emerge in my dreams~

And as moonlight leaves tremble

like the tides ebb and flow

the slender limbs of temptation

cling to the midnight hour.

©SyberRose

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Very beautiful, both in the words you weaved and the message weft from it. Bravo!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Gleb and glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[Tate Morgan]

Hi Rose Well this is a longing heart Besieged by a dream

[SyberRose]

Thank you for peeking in Tate and nice to hear from you today...Rose:)

[Tate Morgan]

you are welcome i waking from hibernation

[jacob erin-cilberto]

music to my eyes to read this...night is so mysterious isn't it? anything is possible in our dreams.

[SyberRose]

thank you so much jacob...i'm happy you enjoyed...thanks for peeking in...Rose:)

[Lydia Shutter]

What a clever use of the term “pizzicato”, Rose! I liked the personification of the wind and weeping willows. Filled with mysterious romantic longing. When the night falls, all fantasies seem possible and temptation looms large. Great imagery in this one. Lydi**

[SyberRose]

Thank you Lydi and happy you enjoyed this one...always nice to hear from you...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

I love this SyberRose. Different from all your other writes...Some powerful metaphors here too...:)...........

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Sami and glad you enjoyed...thanks for peeking in today...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

Always peeking...You are welcome...:)..................

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

An adorable expression of angst, well done, good read.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Thomas and glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[Frieda P]

Pizzicato, what a fun word, adore that first stanza, actually I love the whole thing! Luverly Rose. :-)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Frieda and so glad you enjoyed this one...Rose:)

[redflutterby]

Oh I love that first line and all the ones that follow. You have the touch Rose...so light but yet so strong. Your words always make me dream of loves embrace. ;-)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Red and so good to hear from you as always...Rose:)

[Coll Silvermoon]

this is very majestic. so much imagery. You have a great way with it.

[SyberRose]

Thank you for taking time to read today...Rose:)