Indigo Winds

 

The autumn leaves sing a lullaby      

            and the sky is laden               

with clouds of jaded secrets,

while the breath of indigo winds

            whisper in the language of love~

 

  I dream in an azure sphere of light

 while two hearts resonate in time

as fate and destiny...when kismet meets,

and scent of vanilla oils shimmer

            upon the body of the dark ~

 

While the tides splash satin and lace

            upon the sandy bed of the shore;

 the harvest moon of a Cognac bright

            pleases the palate of the night.

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading

Reviews

[wunder]

~”I dream in an azure sphere of light
while two hearts resonate in time
as fate and destiny...when kismet meets,
and scent of vanilla oils shimmer
upon the body of the dark”~

~sooo much lovely imagery written
so smoothly – this is magnificent!!!~ :)

[SyberRose]

thank you so much James and happy you enjoyed this piece....Rose:)

[wunder]

~my pleasure~ :))

[emmajoy]

' ..when kismet meets, ~ and scent of vanilla oils shimmer ~ upon the body of the dark ~ ',

You create such beautiful phrases and thus, mind pictures that energise all the senses too .. how wonderful is that! I feel calm .. truly calm. Smiling.

[SyberRose]

thank you Emma and so glad you enjoyed my words...and I appreciate your visit as always...:)

[DrD]

What I like most about this work is the delicate form that almost hints of being vulnerable and innocent. It has that touch of eloquence I always like with excellent word selection. Very well done indeed.

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much DrD...and it was nice of you to visit this evening...Rose:)

[Rita L. Sev]

had a feeling I would enjoy the color imagery in this piece, just from the title. :) Vibrant and romantic, a lovely write, Rose!

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Rita...appreciate your visit tonight...:)

[Lydia Shutter]

A very pleasing romantic write filled with glorious images. You have woven the beauty of nature through the beauty of romance in this one. So pretty. Lydi**

[SyberRose]

Thank you Lydi and so nice to hear from you this evening as always...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Sorry I missed this wonderful poem. I was caught up in things. I usually read your poems and get reenergized with wonderful feelings ...You possess a wonderful voice which is so soothing in your voice tapings in the other ones......Bravo

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Sami and so nice of you to say...and i'm glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

I did...You are welcome...:)
Please check and see if Frieda is Ok. She is sick ...Take care...:)

[SyberRose]

She has the flu still Jack said...i guess it takes time...

[Sami Khalil]

OK>>>>>>>>>>>>:)

[B-poet]

A lovely & poignant write. Loved the overall theme you came up with here. Your writing definitely has it's own distinctive voice. Poetic sensuality at its best. You deserve a publishing deal. Loved the picture you picked out as well. Keep up the great work SyberRose A riveting read. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Brian for that awesome review...so nice of you to visit and happy you enjoyed this piece:)

[Jack...]

Beautiful almost doesn't seem enough for this gorgeous poem my sweet friend. Enchanting and enticing is how this flows from the screen. Once again, your pen brings feelings of pure affection.

[SyberRose]

thank you Jack and good to hear from you as always...i'm glad you liked this...Rose:)

[Diana]

Beautiful yet somehow unreal. I like the allusion to the moon and darkness, perhaps the only light in the night sky? I also find your signature wonderfully befitting.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Diana and happy you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)