Grains of Sand

Video and Audio.. Photograph by Myrralex

In slumber of darkness when all is still

Only the fragrance...a sleeping daffodil

I hear whispers echoing in the night

Love letters written in sands of moonlight~

 

Envelope of the night sealed by oceans kiss

Tucked away below in ocean of abyss

Although lovers have died so long ago

Hearts still ache for someone they used to know~

 

Upon the shore of a thousand years past

Ribbon of tears wrapped around the winds mast

Footprints embedded upon salt kissed shores

Shadows searching for the love they adored~

 

Lost within mysteries and grains of sand

A shadow reaching...reaching for a hand.

 

©SyberRose

 

Author's Note

thank you to Anto for producing this video and his lovely guitar music is in background.

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nice poem with great metaphors.
I love the ending "A shadow reaching...reaching for a hand."
Whatever happened in the past...we may lost someone but still our hearts yearn for a hand to hold on."
Impressive, Rose.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much dhaye...glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[MOON]

Beautifully crafted write , poignant with great flow and depth.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Moon so much for visiting this morning...Rose:)

[ms. barrie]

Wow, this is just simply stunning, Syber Rose, what breathtaking poignantly enchanting
Imagery you weaved through out this write. Not to mention the amazing fluidity. This
Is def one of my favs on here. Exquisite. 100/100! Thanks for sharing! :)

~ Barrie Joy

[SyberRose]

Thank you for that lovely review Barrie Joy...i'm so glad you enjoyed it...and thanks for peeking in...:)..Rose

[ms. barrie]

You're very welcome, Syber Rose, looking forward to reading more of your writes! :)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

There is something very special about the way you write and rhyme, there is a unique velvet, warmth through every breath of your words, so touching and expertly written, lovely work here.

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Sheema...I'm happy you enjoyed this piece and it is always nice hearing from you:)

[Little Whisper]

Your poem touched my heart beautifully so.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much and for peeking in today...Rose:)

[Pryde Foltz]

What a beautiful piece. It was nice to hear your voice. Hearing how the poet read always give it so much more meaning. Nice playing, ANTO. You two were amazing.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Pryde...I'm glad you enjoyed this collaboration...Rose:)

[Lydia Shutter]

Touching in its poignant air. Many of your poems are wrapped around the sea and the moonlight.....and I do enjoy that. Beautifully written, Rose. Lydi**

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Lydi for peeking in...Rose:)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You are the ultimate romantic! This is gorgeous Rose!
I am awestruck at the emotion you have evoked here..it's beautifully sad...

P.S. Your soft voice and Anto's music is magnifique'!! You made me cry a bit... ~xoxo~

[SyberRose]

Oh really ...well i'm glad you enjoyed listening to the video..as Anthony worked hard on it..Thank you Robbie for peeking in...I've been away for a few days so i'm try to catch up..hugsxo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Welcome back Rose... glad you are home. :)
This is a magical write, indeed. (((hugs))~xoxo~

[Ken Simm.]

I always feel that your work is like silk slipping though my hand. So smooth and delicate.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Ken...so glad you enjoyed and thank you for peeking in today...Rose:)

[anumenon]

although lovers will die but your poem will not die it is a poem which is enriched with love, and is lovable as you

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much for reading...Rose