Dusk to Dawn

The white satin tides fall softly

upon the shoulder of the shore

as dusk removes the sarong

of a pink particle sunset

 

While the candelabra of the stars

            sing a harmonious song of luster

 the nuances of the wind shadow dance

            across the mind of a stranger

 

The wingspan of an incarnadine moon

drifts to the other side

and the aubade of the dawn

            awaits for destiny to arrive

 

As the esoteric secret of lovers

vanish with the ebb of the tides

back into the undulating waves

            of the tumultuous sea.

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Justsimplyjulia]

Absolutely lovely. you've painted a vivid, yet beautiful picture in the readers mind.
Great work.
-Dragon

[SyberRose]

Thank you DH...i'm glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose

[Pryde Foltz]

AHHHHH.... Such beautiful words.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Pryde...:)

[ron]

This is a beautiful poem of a perfect night of love.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Ron...yes from Dusk to Dawn...glad you enjoyed ...Rose:)

[ron]

The picture was a perfect reflection of you poem Rose :) xx

[B-poet]

Loved this one. I like the eloquent journey you've taken the reader on. Fantastic written imagery in the making. Great write SyberRose. A wonderful read. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Brian and thank you for visiting...appreciate your nice comments...Rose:)

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Very good. I like how it sounds perfect, even without rhyming. You must be a very skilled poet

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Ally for that wonderful comment...and so glad you enjoyed this piece...and thanks for peeking in today...Rose:)

[Jack...]

Beauty surrounds us each and every day if we take the time to look and now part of the beauty of my day are your absolutely gorgeous words. nicely done my friend.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Jack and for brightening my day too...Rose:)

[Will Neill]

Rose, Your poem read like a sip of Champange, another good peice.
Will

[SyberRose]

Thank you Will and for taking time to peek in this morning of course it's not morning where you are but its only seven thirty in the morning here...glad you enjoyed....Rose:)

[Michael G. Smith]

Many good lines here. I was feel like I am in a dream when I read your words.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Mike and nice to hear from you ...Rose:)

[Adam Whitworth]

lovely words, lovely nocturne

[SyberRose]

thank you Adam...glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[Frieda P]

Just gorgeous Rose, your poetry is as beautiful as the photograph....

As the esoteric secret of lovers
vanish with the ebb of the tides
back into the undulating waves
of the tumultuous sea.

Each of your stanzas could stand on alone, I especially love the last, just a sigh on the page, stunning.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Frieda and so nice hearing from you as always...Rose:)