Ivory Stars

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Hear the sighs of a violin at night
within the pianissimo breeze

Hearts beat like a flower drum song

as fanning cymbals in moonlight tease~

 

Round and round like a carousel
the chorus of dark shadows ballet
Ivory stars in galaxy of the sky
fall in a glissando array~

Soft and sensual is the tempo of romance
upon stage of gossamer doves
Let me be your Prima Ballerina

my Premier Danseur, my love.

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading.

Reviews

[B-poet]

Loved the picture as well as your marvelous poem. The final stanza was my favorite. Yet from start to finish this was a creative masterpiece. Great Work SyberRose. A riveting write & read. :)

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Brian and so glad you enjoyed it and thanks for peeking in...Rose:)

[Antoñyo]

Niiice...I wish I would've read it tonight under better conditions...The flow here is a dance of words one can't help but enjoy! Re-readable, and I'll be back tonight

Thanks for the share

[SyberRose]

Thank you Antonyo and yes come back and read again...glad you enjoyed....Rose:)

[Jack...]

A gentle touch of a hectic Friday afternoon. Just what I needed Rose. Simply lovely.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Jack...yes reading poetry does have a way of relaxing you...thats for sure....Rose:)

[Frieda P]

This is so soft, like a lover's lullaby.....'pianissimo breeze' sigh...just lovely Rose.

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Frieda...i'm glad you enjoyed this piece...and thanks for peeking in...:)

[Frieda P]

Do you speak Italiano or have an Italian lover Rose? ha ;-)

[SyberRose]

haa...how did you guess haa

[Frieda P]

A woman knows ;-)

[revalatia]

well written and gorgeous imagery wrapped within it. Nice work! :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting..Rose:)

[M. Stein]

This piece is so sensual and beautiful, I love the picture as well, it adds a really good whimsical effect. I love the feeling this has, I can literally hear every instrument. The haunting violin, the caress of the piano. I could see these dark, beautiful dancers. This is very, very well written. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. xx.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much and for taking time to read and comment...i'm glad you enjoyed it...Rose:)

[s y e]

You are a gem, Rose - You shine so bright as does your writing. Beautiful as always.

[SyberRose]

Thanks Sye and you are a gem too sweetie...hugss

[BL]

Such a romantic vision and feeling created in the eyes of the lovers and for this reader. I found this very soft and full of movement, a multi- sensory experience in fact.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Bluely and thank you for taking time to visit ...glad you liked it...Rose:)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I envision an angelic ballerina dancing into the arms of her lover...
This is divine, Rose! Your work of art is enchanting! Bravo!~xoxo~:)

[SyberRose]

thank you very much Robbie and so glad you enjoyed this piece...thanks for peeking in...Hugs

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is absolutely mesmerizing to read, Rose... my pleasure! (((hugs)))~xoxo~:)

[Sami Khalil]

"Soft and sensual is the tempo of romance
upon stage of gossamer doves__
Let me be your Prima Ballerina

my Premier Danseur, my love.~"

This is so soft and sensual that makes hearts flutter in the breeze of love dancing on the wings of happiness. A great write to put any in a great mood before the weekend to watch those ivory stars dreaming of love in the distance...Bravo

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Sami and hope you have a great weekend...and thank you for peeking in...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

You too...You are welcome...:)