Ivory Stars

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Hear the sighs of a violin at night
within the pianissimo breeze

Hearts beat like a flower drum song

as fanning cymbals in moonlight tease~

 

Round and round like a carousel
the chorus of dark shadows ballet
Ivory stars in galaxy of the sky
fall in a glissando array~

Soft and sensual is the tempo of romance
upon stage of gossamer doves
Let me be your Prima Ballerina

my Premier Danseur, my love.

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading.

Reviews

[WILDERNESS]

I was whisked away to another land for a moment ................... beautiful poem Rose; as always.

[SyberRose]

Thank you wil...I appreciate your nice comments as always...nice to hear from you..Rose:)

[MsJewel]

I could hear the music play, wishing to dance along. Such beauty in your words. Absolutely stunning poetry.

:) Julie

[SyberRose]

Thank you Julie and i'm glad you enjoyed reading this piece today...Rose:)

[MikeV]

"The chorus of dark shadows ballet"
That line just took me away
great and very beautiful write :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Mike and nice to hear from you as always...Rose:)

[Rita L. Sev]

I wish I had even a wisp of the gracefulness of your poem... sweet music and romance. Very nice, Rose!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Rita...I didn't see you sneak in here...ha...thanks for peeking in...Rose:)

[Stella Armour]

i like the way you have included the musical instruments to set the scene Rose.. a very lovely poem .

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much dear...hugss...glad you enjoyed it...:)

[Lydia Shutter]

This write has a mysterious air....mystical almost. Filled with seductive lines and sensual images. Very lovely, Rose. Lydi**

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Lydi...Glad you enjoyed and thank you for peeking in this morning....Rose:)

[Einstein Noodle]

beautiful...ever the romantic aren't you? thoroughly enjoyed the music of your dance...nice one
E.

[SyberRose]

Yes the romantic ha...thank you E. for peeking in this morning...glad you liked it...Rose:)

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Rose,

This is a beautiful piece, Dear Lady, and a pleasure to read. Your writing stands apart from the common fare on WC. And your writing is always, in my experience, fresh and lovely. This is no exception.

Kudos. High marks. Greatly enjoyed. I feel your passion.

My very best regards,

Rick

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much for that awesome review Rick and so glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[NITHIN PURPLE]

beautiful poem....nice it is

[SyberRose]

Thank you Nithin and I'm glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose

[Cassie]

Hey Rose, I loved the last stanza, basically the whole poem is flowing nicely. you do this so well. Dont stop writing. Hugs

[SyberRose]

Thank you Cassie and like your new photo too...Hugss

[Cassie]

Thank you Rose