Until You Return

 My soft whispers flow like Chianti

through the Venice canal...upon the

erogenous shorelines of your earlobe;

as I hold the sweet taste of your scent

sweet wafting ~ within the gondolas of the night__

as the red tint of my Pouty lips tattoo

a memory of sinful pleasure and invisible images~

                        **********

 As fickle tides splash freely upon the dawn,

 I will await your return and surrender

 within the bedroom of your eyes__

 as you leave me with the last whisper

 of heated song  "Ti amo" 

 my insatiable inamorato~

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

The romance of your heart is immeasurable, excellent piece, Rose.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much and happy holidays to you Travis...Rose:)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

You are most welcome. Happy holidays to you and yours as well Rose.

[Cassie]

of heated song "Ti amo" my insatiable inamorato~ Am lost for comments, I dont know how to review this one because this one is good too. You know as usual I loved it. Hugs

[SyberRose]

my insatiable lover....ha...glad you enjoyed it...and thanks Cassie for peeking in Hugss

[Hannah]

Beautiful imagery Rose, I loved the passion in this piece... You made me fall in love with Italy all over again... and Italian men :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Hannah...and so nice to hear from you...Rose:)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

"within the bedroom of your eyes." -Excellent line! :)
"a memory of sinful pleasure." -We all have this memory. Haha..

You ended this good poem with a romantic note, Rose. Lovely. :)

[SyberRose]

thank you Blue...i'm glad you liked it and thanks for visiting today...Rose:)

[Tom]

After such a sweet parting I don't think the separation will be long !

A serenade that any Venetian resident would surely open their window and look below on hearing!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Tom and nice to hear from you today as always...Rose:)

[Antoñyo]

BELLISSIMO!
Tattooing lips usually works for me! ...and how sexy is "as I hold the sweet taste of your scent" ???

Perfect read for the crack of dawn, Thanks Rose!

[SyberRose]

You are welcome Antonyo...and thank you for peeking in this morning...glad you liked this piece...:)

[A Human attemtping to E..]

no matter what it is good as it always is but ha in I cant help but to say but "Ti amo" your hands you have which you use to write poetry upon any page that you allow your words to be placed upon.

[SyberRose]

Thanks for reading and commenting...Rose

[s y e]

wow rose, this is a steamy Italian romance..... all we need now is for some Italian to read it and we'll be all his, haha. I loved this!

[SyberRose]

Haa...thank you Sye...you can go to Venice on your honeymoon one day ha...Rose:)

[s y e]

Haah, thats yonks away!

[SyberRose]

haa...well you never know..but don't rush into anything ha

[s y e]

never in a kazillion years will i rush

[A Human attemtping to Eat.]

OMG I AM AN Italiano about to read it and when I do what will that mean for me? HEHEHe ;) but seriously I Am an Italian.

[s y e]

Ha, this is very cool. Enjoy the poem then, Rose is an amazing writer.

[Einstein Noodle]

ahhhhhhhhhh sweet and steamy Italian romance ...was thinking all that's needed is the language, as I read; then you gave it to me...have never been to Venice but go there often... I am an Irish lad married to an Italian fire brand..."Ti amo" was the first Italian phrase she made me learn.. :)
E.

[SyberRose]

Thank you and so glad you enjoyed E...I enjoyed writing it...Rose:)