The Voyeur

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She was but a shadow behind the shade

and he watched her every night as she bathed

Her silhouette moving gracefully

for his eyes only...so beautifully~

He was her tall and handsome voyeur

and watched as she was completely bare_

Her image danced upon his mind

as he sipped feverishly his crimson wine_

He moved closer to the window

  so he could see her in the flesh...

his mysterious dark shadow

and her voluptuous breast~

And to his utter amazement

  within the ebb and flow of night

(turned out to be only)

a seductive flame of candlelight.

©SyberRose

Author's Note

thank you to Anto for background sound.

Reviews

[s y e]

Woah, I was not expecting that Rose! Totally unexpected ending, love -- wow!

[SyberRose]

Good im glad I surprised you haa...hugs

[WILDERNESS]

No no no .................. we want ecstasy, not a candle flame :) splendid write

[SyberRose]

haa...i'm just a tease....thank you for peeking in my window Wil...Rose:)

[Trace]

Those dam flames get us every time. Fun and seductive write with a cute (thats what you get for peeping) twist at the end. Enjoyed. Trace

[SyberRose]

Thanks again Trace...I'm glad you enjoyed the twist at the end...I tried not to give it away...Rose:)

[ANTO]

Wow! - what a cracking write. The brain being deceived by the eyes, a superb twist. Almost ghostly...
If I return to writing it will be poems like this that inspire me to do so.
thanks for sharing Rose
XXX

[SyberRose]

Well you better return as we all love your poems Anthony...glad you enjoyed this one...hugs

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

That was spectacular, with a very much unexpected ending! Excellent write, Rose!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Travis...i'm happy you enjoyed this piece and thanks for visiting today...Rose:)

[Einstein Noodle]

oh what the imagination can do for sex! your poem had me going there Ms. Syber
E.

[SyberRose]

haa...well i'm glad you enjoyed this piece E....thanks for peeking in...Rose:)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Clever wordcraft and great ending. Thanks for the RR, Rose. ;)

[SyberRose]

Thank you for taking time to read Blue...appreciate it...Rose:)

[noone]

Very nice and an interesting little twist. I like your word play. Good job.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sammi and nice to hear from you this morning...glad you enjoyed...Rose:)

[Luke L]

Great piece, very relatable to many of us perverts out there :). I always hope to catch people f*****g or doing something sexual unexpectedly and be able to enjoy the show

[SyberRose]

Well good luck to ya..ha..glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose

[Rita L. Sev]

;) Well, he got what he deserved, didn't he? Sultry flow with a witty twist - great piece, Rose!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Rita...yes he did ha...glad you enjoyed...Rose:)