The Voyeur

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She was but a shadow behind the shade

and he watched her every night as she bathed

Her silhouette moving gracefully

for his eyes only...so beautifully~

He was her tall and handsome voyeur

and watched as she was completely bare_

Her image danced upon his mind

as he sipped feverishly his crimson wine_

He moved closer to the window

  so he could see her in the flesh...

his mysterious dark shadow

and her voluptuous breast~

And to his utter amazement

  within the ebb and flow of night

(turned out to be only)

a seductive flame of candlelight.

©SyberRose

Author's Note

thank you to Anto for background sound.

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Very seductive and oh so suggestive. Then, bam! A twist ending! O'Henry would be proud, Rose! Very clever work here. Lydi**

[SyberRose]

Thank you Lydia...and thanks for peeking in as always...Rose:)

[MikeV]

I loved it, that twist in the end was awesome
You painted a really good picture in my mind! :)

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Mike and i'm happy you enjoyed this piece also...Rose:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what a great twist, Rose...

and really enticing wording...

bet it burned him up in two ways.

jacob

[SyberRose]

thank you very much Jacob...glad you liked this piece...Rose:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

more than liked it Rose!!!!!!!!!!

[Shirley Wontas]

This such a gorgeous piece of work, Rose. I admire how you portrait the scene of a floating mind in such a beautiful way. So dramatic and elegant..you amaze me with your words. Thank you for sharing.. :)

[SyberRose]

thanks so much Shirley...and so nice of you to say...glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[Frieda P]

A seductive piece here Rose, you strung us along and we fell for it, that was some big candle to shadow those voluptuous breasts, stirring in kinky sort of way....!

[SyberRose]

haa...yes a big candle ha...kinky for a change...:)thanks Frieda for peeking in.

[Michael G. Smith]

This strange poem you wrap up a sick individual within a sense of romance. I'm glad to know that he didn't violate any woman with his perverted eyes.

[SyberRose]

He couldnt help himself ha...the jokes on him....thank you M. G..for peeking in...Rose:)

[Jack...]

Oh my Rose...what happened here...she turned out to be a candle's reflection on the shade. This was so beautiful and sensual, it does not hardly seem fair, but, that's how it goes I guess. Still, beauty follows your every word my sweet friend.

[SyberRose]

The fantasy world and the real world ...take your pick haa...thank you Jack for peeking in...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

A lot of people derive sexual pleasure and fulfillment from different sources and for different reasons. The narrator must be proud of her assets and she has the recognition or the satisfaction of the voyeur watching her bathe which it is some men's fetish which is illegal...A sultry and powerful write...:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sami...yes its best to keep the door locked when bathing...as someone might walk in unexpectedly as what happened to me once haa.Rose

[Sami Khalil]

Ok. I understand...:)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is beautifully penned Rose!...reminds me of the story of Bathsheba...

Gorgeously displayed...
A sultry write, indeed!~xoxo~ :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Robbie and I'm happy you enjoyed this piece...hugs

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I did!..
Immensely! (((hugs))) :)