If I Should Falter

If I should falter please forgive me

for not walking the path of perfection,

 as I would gladly caress your troubled brow

if you stumbled upon my heart;

 as I carry endurance well~

 

I did not blink as I learned

the new found language

of bohemian desires and a new wealth of

                inspiration to discover~

 

So when I feel unjust ~ I'll try to remember

I wasn't born in hell,

but from the womb of understanding

upon a foolhardy night.

 

@SyberRose

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

You never ceaze to amaze us with great poetry and deep meanings...All splendid...:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sami and I appreciate your thought provoking poetry too...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

The feelings are mutual...You are welcome...:)

[Zahra]

Beautifully woven piece, really very nice.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much for peeking in today...Rose:)

[annabellee]

"If I should falter please forgive me
for not walking the path of perfection"
Nobody's perfect, everybody fails sometimes.
Really good poem. I enjoyed it a lot :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you annabellee...and for taking time read today...Rose:)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

If you should falter just remember you are human and mistakes are human nature.
I love the vulnerability you expressed here.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Dale and welcome back...glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My pleasure, and thank you. good to be back.

[Chris]

So you ARE human? Sigh... that means Father Christmas...

[SyberRose]

Yes just a mere human ha...thank you Chris for peeking in this morning...:)

[Chris]

Butbutbut... sigh - all my illusions ...shattered! and on a Saturday morning no less!

[SyberRose]

haa...sorry

[Chris]

I'ld believe you more if you were rolling on the floor laughing ...less...

[Adam Whitworth]

another good to read poem, thankyou

[SyberRose]

Thank you Adam for taking time to read and comment today...Rose:)

[Jack...]

Good morning Rose. Once more your beautiful words are what greet my eyes. I love the theme of this poem...

"So when I feel unjust ~ I'll try to remember

I wasn't born in hell,

but from the womb of understanding

upon a foolhardy night."


And I say thank God for that foolhardy night. Very nice my friend.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Jack...so glad you liked it and good morning to you too...and have a great weekend...Rose:)

[Lydia Shutter]

"Bohemian desires" seems many fathers see their daughter's teenage years as roadmaps to those desires. They are frightened they will lose their daughters to the outside world and the daughters will forget from whence they came. Still, they are understanding.....and forgiving. I liked this one, Rose. Lydi**

[SyberRose]

Thank you Lydi...glad you enjoyed this piece and thanks for peeking in this morning...Rose:)

[MikeV]

You words are always so beautiful Rose!
Thank you for sharing this, i always always enjoy
reading your work :)

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Mike...so nice of you to say...and thanks for peeking in this morning...Rose:)