If I Should Falter

If I should falter please forgive me

for not walking the path of perfection,

 as I would gladly caress your troubled brow

if you stumbled upon my heart;

 as I carry endurance well~

 

I did not blink as I learned

the new found language

of bohemian desires and a new wealth of

                inspiration to discover~

 

So when I feel unjust ~ I'll try to remember

I wasn't born in hell,

but from the womb of understanding

upon a foolhardy night.

 

@SyberRose

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading

Reviews

[Shirley Wontas]

Oh I love this one, Rose. This was a very touching piece. Amazing words. I can related with this poem of yours..thank you for sharing.. *xoxo*

[Shirley Wontas]

+ going to my fave :)))

[SyberRose]

Thank you Shirley and i'm happy you enjoyed this and can relate...hugs

[Tom]

A wonderful poem almost prayer like, no one is perfect but redemption is always the solution if mistakes are made !

[SyberRose]

Thank you Tom for visiting today...it's nice to hear from you as always...Rose:)

[WILDERNESS]

Wisdom galore .............. always a treat.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Wil for taking time to read today...Rose:)

[LL]

Nice fonts here too. An elegant piece.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Levi for taking time to read this morning...Rose:)

[LL]

Your welcome:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is excellent...all about understanding...there isn't enough of it...and many relationships falter because only one side shows it...the other absorbs it and doesn't give it back...

remember bob seeger's song? "Understanding" you made me think of it..and start humming it as i was reading.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Jacob...oh did you start humming it...I don't know how you remember all the songs as you do...you must listen to them all the time ha...glad you enjoyed this...Rose:)

[SyberRose]

I just listened to the song...i remember it now...a good song.

[shallimarRose]

Going in my favorites .. thanks for the rr.. Rose

[SyberRose]

Thank you Rose...glad you liked this piece...hugs

[Justsimplyjulia]

absolutely beautiful. Wonderful job.
-Dragon

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much for taking time to comment tonight...Rose:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Interesting, there are many places this could go.

If I should falter please forgive me
for not walking the path of perfection,
as I would gladly caress your troubled brow...

These lines brought to mind a scene from "Jesus Christ Superstar", an exchange between JC and Mary Magdalene. I think we all need to know that we are forgiven, even if we have done no wrong... human nature and society tell us that we are imperfect... Got me thinking tonight, Rose!

[SyberRose]

yes many places we could go with this as you said ha...thanks Rita for peeking in tonight:)

[Michael G. Smith]

Lovely piece with some things to think about.

[SyberRose]

Thank you M.G...and thanks for taking time to read...Rose:)

[Frieda P]

Sounds like a poet's plea to me, you always wrap your pen so eloquently around any subject you write Rose.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Frieda, and for those lovely comments...Rose:)

[Frieda P]

Always my pleasure Rose. :-)