Self Portrait

For Contest

I am the only one who really knows me

and a twin inside who others don't see

I am a mother a sister a daughter and a wife

a scar upon my neck...from a surgeons knife

A lopsided smile...with my own writing style

A woman not young as I used to be

but time has been very good to me

I have a frown line that botox would love to inject

but since botox is not permanent...I object.

A loner by nature..I am no party girl

I enjoy my solitude so poems can unfurl

I don't drink...I don't smoke...I love a good joke

I am a giver of presents at Christmas time

I give jewellery but get soap of peach or lime

Just a poet in love with beautiful words

enjoy watching the morn's beautiful birds.

©SyberRose

Author's Note

thank you for reading

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

I agree with you about Botox...why bother? I think those lines were earned and they add beauty to a face! (That's my story and I'm sticking to it! LOL) I have a scar on my neck too....perhaps from the same surgery you had. I liked the catchy rhyme in this poem, Rose. Nice gettting to know you a little better. Lydi**

[SyberRose]

Thanks Lydi...mine was thyroid surgery twenty years ago...well if I hit the lottery i will get a read moreThanks Lydi...mine was thyroid surgery twenty years ago...well if I hit the lottery i will get a
makeover though haa...Rose

[Lydia Shutter]

Mine too....the big C in the thyroid in 2012. You never know how much alike people are till you start talking, right?

[SyberRose]

Right...so true Lydi...:)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is a soft spoken expression ... you have painted a sweet palette of colors upon your canvas... Grace, confidence, and beauty are what I see within your self portrait.

A lovely write Rose! :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Robbie, so nice of you to say and thank you for peeking in today...Rose:)

[Me]

and a beautiful poet you are dear Rose, loved this :) x

[SyberRose]

Thank you it was fun writing Raven...glad you liked it...Rose..:)

[Distantview123]

A nicely articulated 'self-portrait' in words. I presume this is for the contest. I don't enter contests here, but I wish you all the best! A good write. ~ Robert.

[SyberRose]

Yes i thought i would join in...thanks so much Robert and nice to hear from you today...Rose:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. You sound like a wonderful person to me. I like the quiet time and to spend time with the family. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Coyote. I enjoyed writing and how about you...are you writing one too?

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Hello, Rose. Nice poem here. I love the lines
"I am a giver of presents at Christmas time
I give jewellery but get soap of peach or lime"
How I wish I could be there at Christmas time. LOL.

Humorous but clearly describes who you are. Great one, Rose.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Dhaye...nice to hear from you today...and thanks so much for peeking in...Rose:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You're welcome.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

The humor is excellent. You're "a giver of presents at Christmas time", you say? I expect one on Christmas. Haha. ;)

[SyberRose]

What kind of soap do you use ha...thank you Blue for peeking in...Rose

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Lol. Do you have something that makes someone very beautiful overnight? Hahaha.

[SyberRose]

Yes but it's a secret ha

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Haha sure :)

[Dye]

I am so happy that this contest/challenge was started. I feel like I have gained some insight on some of the other users here at the Cafe' including you. I love your poem. You have a great sense of humor that really shows in this.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Dye for peeking in...I'm happy you enjoyed this piece...it was fun writing...Rose:)

[Tate Morgan]

i THINK THIS COVERS 90 PERCENT OF WHAT WE WANTED TO KNOW AND THE MYSTERY IS STILL THERE

[SyberRose]

Okay blue eyes...now you know ha...no mystery now...thanks for peeking in Tate...Rose:)

[Tate Morgan]

HAHA yeah well Mysteries are a good thing just enough to peak interest

[Lily Finch]

oh its soooo awesomeeeelove it DEAR ROSE .... lovely write

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Lily and i'm so happy you liked this piece...Rose:)

[Lily Finch]

you always welcome dear .... :)