Crystal Blue Waters

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Crystal blue waters are calling to me,

within the whirlpool of your eyes

I melt within your soft whispers,

and the ebb and flow of the tides

The fruit of your kiss deliciously sweet;

the nectar of your lips I crave.

I feel the sweet warmth of your body,

flowing over me like a tidal wave.

Wispy locks of your light brown hair

blowing in the midnight winds

Walking along the sands of the beach,

and stars in your eyes within;

Crystal blue waters are calling to me,

as my reflection in your eyes I see.

©SyberRose

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[B-poet]

A stroke of romantic genius. Great work SyberRose. A compelling write & read. :)

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Brian for peeking in this evening...Rose:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Your beautiful piece of romance is making me wish it was Friday night... Very nice, Rose!

[SyberRose]

thank you Rita...well now I know what you do on Friday nights ha...glad I could take you there:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! My husband, also a teacher, has a second job on Saturday and Sunday - Friday is our date night. ;)

[Lydia Shutter]

Romance, the moonlight, and the salt water lapping at your feet.....heavy sigh....what a romantic scene you have painted with your words, Rose....not to mention what a gorgeous painting you chose to accompany your words. Gorgeous imagery. Lydi**

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much Lydi...and thank you for peeking in and taking time to read...Rose

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

"Crystal blue waters are calling to me,
as my reflection in your eyes I see."... this is poetry to fall in love with. As always, you show us exactly how its done.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Travis...and so nice to hear from you this evening as always....Rose:)

[Frieda P]

I just want to languish in this one Rose, it's stunning, just enough warmth to make it stirring, outstanding, you do have a unique way to cuddle up to words.....

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Frieda...poets do have a way of cuddling with words for sure ha...:)

[Frieda P]

I'm pretty sure I could pick yours out of a poetry lineup, my pleasure :-)

[SyberRose]

haa...poetry lineup...i bet i could pick yours out too...:)

[Misillusions]

Oh my heavens, this is a gorgeous read! Love and romance, and you can't go wrong here.

Thank you for this wonderful work of art!!!

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much...I appreciate your visit and comments...Rose:)

[ANTO]

Oh this is what its all about Rose. Midnight walks along the strand with the wind lightly tousling lovers hair and the salt gently playing with the lips so that each desires the moisture of the other. This is writing..!
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[SyberRose]

Thank you for that lovely review Anthony...and so glad you enjoyed...Rose:)

[ANTO]

The picture you chose is a perfect match for this palette of images you created with words
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[MikeV]

That poem was even more beautiful then the
photo, and that photo reminds me of what heaven looks like.
keep it up! Very beautiful piece :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Mike and yes i loved the painting too...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Amazing how you and Jack come up with great romantic poetry. Sooo beautiful and well worded. Imagery is stunning...:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Sami...he is even more of a romantic then I am haa....im happy you enjoyed..:)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. You are welcome...Still peeking...:)