Dewdrop Upon The Rose

As the black sarong of a shadow falls

                the welcoming arms of evening are nigh

and the breeze of enchantment calls

                kissing  bosom of the sunset goodbye~

 

Yet, the moon upon the pillow of night

                leaves a dewdrop upon the rose

and tender wounds of the night heal

                as blue iris in the sky glows~

 

Within the ambiance of a heartbeat

                the roots of a weeping willow run deep

along the weary path of destiny

                where shadows of  fate sleep~

 

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Beautiful, your style is most lucid and a pleasure to follow through, well done!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sheema...and so nice of you to peek in today...Rose:)

[leafsailor]

The poets nature to find words like flowers bloom is evident in this rich poem of destines questions

[SyberRose]

thank you David for peeking in today...nice to hear from you...Rose:)

[Frieda P]

Always the consummate romantic, must be luverly to have a name! that lends itself so well too! :-)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much and good morning to you Frieda...hugs

[Joan*Eckhart]

This was very gentle and full of romantic notions. I enjoyed it very much.

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much Joan...I'm glad you it enjoyed...Rose:)

[ron]

Very romantic and poetic Rose. Your words are far more refined than my own and you use them as a master sculpter uses their tools to sculpt a master piece.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much for that lovely compliment...and i'm happy you enjoyed this Ron...Rose

[Ken Simm.]

I think you wrote this with a quill by candlelight. Lovely.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Ken and I think I will try writing by candlelight one day...Rose

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

So much positive enlightenment in your words, full of tenderness and grace.
I especially love these lines...

Within the ambiance of a heartbeat
the roots of a weeping willow run deep

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Dale...glad you liked this piece...Rose

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Always my pleasure Rose xo

[Lydia Shutter]

Great personification in this one. "the black sarong of a shadow falls" WOW, what an image that creates for me, Rose! There is a poignant beauty to this poem. Really wonderful. Lydi**

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much again...I really appreciate your comments Lydi...so nice of you to visit this
read moreThank you so much again...I really appreciate your comments Lydi...so nice of you to visit this
evening...Rose

[Einstein Noodle]

embracing the night; the moon ever a promise of light;

"Within the ambiance of a heartbeat

the roots of a weeping willow run deep"

I can swim in those lines!
what a great job Rose.
E.

[SyberRose]

Thank you E...so nice to hear from you this morning and like the new picture...Rose

[Einstein Noodle]

your welcome...and Thank you!

[Vikrantsingh]

Great read sweet Rose. Love it :)
Thanks for sharing :)
Well I loved the pic (Rose) more.
- Singh :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Singh...glad you liked both...Rose:)