Ripples of a Carnal Moon

In wilderness of an Alaskan sky

the lovely goddess of the dawn

Aurora Borealis

streaks nakedly across the morn~

 

The artistic canvas of the earth

is painted in a vibrant hue

And with rays of golden hair

and ocean depths of azure blue~

 

 

 As nuances of red in the sunset

bathe in wavelets of a tropical lagoon

A flowing waterfall of bliss

drowns within ripples of a carnal moon~ 

 

 

The whispering winds of yesterday

flutters to the other side of light

like wings of an Adonis Butterfly

escaping beneath the glass of the night.

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Vikrantsingh]

Carries very sensitively & pure deeper as you listen it from heart and read it from your eyes. I was not amazed to read such a amazing read from you Rose. I loved it - touchy and sensible with proper execution.
Last stanza was really great
The whispering winds of yesterday
flutters to the other side of light
like wings of an Adonis Butterfly
escaping beneath the glass of the night.
Amazing work :)
- Singh :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much Singh for that lovely review and so nice to hear from you as always...Rose:)

[Vikrantsingh]

My pleasure :)

[Jack...]

Rose, You take me there, your words always lift me and send my mind to beautiful places. This was gorgeous, simply gorgeous. You do have a way of moving us with your beautiful words. Loved this one my friend.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Jack...always nice to hear from you first thing in the morning...in your bright yellow shirt ha...Rose:)

[Rita L. Sev]

It's wonderful to be reading your beautiful words again, Rose! This is such a lovely poem to read to begin my day!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Rita and hope you are enjoying your new classroom...Rose

[Sami Khalil]

The goddess of romance in a splendid nature scene with the phenomenon of the aurora borealis streaking the beautiful sky. It makes the reader to want to visit Alaska...Bravo

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much Sami...I love the Alaska wilderness shows on tv...thanks for peeking in this morning...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

Mee too...You are welcome...:)

[Tom]

Very seductive imagery of the moon looking down from above and the luscious view of mother nature's many glorious picturesque scenes on earth!

Intensely sweet and romantic in rhythm and flow, assuaging, massaging and caressing the desires of passionate love at every opportunity, splendid once more Cyber-rose !

[SyberRose]

Hi Tom...nice to hear from you today...and thank you for that wonderful review too...Rose:)

[Tom]

It is not even near commensurate with your beautiful poem Rose !

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

And she returns only how she can... the most romantic pen hand has return triumphantly! That was beautiful, and such a tender read.

[SyberRose]

AAwww...thank you Travis...that was sweet...always so nice to hear from you...Rose:)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

And it is always great to read your work... glad to see you are back.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The queen of eloquent romance is back and still making hearts race with her poetry.

[SyberRose]

I just read yours ha...yes i heard you were gone too Dale...welcome back...:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I wasn't gone, just in a creative drought. But thank you.

[Frieda P]

Yes, she's back!! You always write the softest of romantic poetry that entices Rose, it wafts on your page in pure elegance....

As nuances of red in the sunset
bathe in wavelets of a tropical lagoon
A flowing waterfall of bliss
drowns within ripples of a carnal moon~

That's a big sigh right there and could have stood alone, love it, good to read you again...glad you've joined us again. :-)

[SyberRose]

thank you so much...i'm glad you like it Frieda..and it's nice to be back where I belong ha...hugs

[Frieda P]

You were sorely missed by everyone, did you read the lovely sonnet Anto wrote for you?