As The Sun Goes Down

Does the sun compete with the stars?

      while the moon covets from afar

Is the morning jealous of the night?

      as it yearns for moonlight~

Until the evenings rendezvous

       stealing a moment till adieu,

Although parting is sweet sorrow

      they long again for tomorrow~

 

When the heartbeat of temptation

      hides in shadows of disguise,

The brazing sun goes down

      and moon and stars arise~

They share the seabed of the ocean

      Ménage à trois of devotion~

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

so sexy ..absolutely adore the interactions ...pic is inspiring and fits to a "T" .. "...parting is sweet sorrow.." is brand new in the setting of your poem ..very much enjoyed this experience Syber! .. wish you would return and post anew :( but i am glad to find all these old posts i missed!
E.

[redflutterby]

Lots of lovely questions in this one Rose...very whimsical! ;-)

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Red...glad you enjoyed it...Rose:)

[AmandaN]

Beautifully written, thanks for sharing :-)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Amanda for peeking in:)

[SteveB]

I LOVE this image! Well done. Great rhyme and meter as with all your work [you do have an ear] and fantastic imagery. Brava Rose.

[SyberRose]

Hi Steve...thank you so much... i'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for peeking in...Rose:)

[Daniel Fourie]

Great rhyme scheme! Please check out some of my poetry, particularly Dreams, You and You Mean So Much To Me

[SyberRose]

thank you for peeking in today Daniel...Rose

[s y e]

How I have missed your work, my SyberRose- Sybernoodles has missed her fill of your splendid work accompanied by some lovely artwork that always takes my breath away, this was no different. You have left me staring at my screen - most likely looking weird - like it has just come alive!

[SyberRose]

And I have missed you too sweetie...and looking foward to reading more of your wonderful poems too.
As everyone else is too...hugsss

[s y e]

Woo! I have my other half back, yay! hugss

[Saumya]

i completely loved this beautiful work of yours dear.....
not only the words, but also and most essentially the image swayed away my heart..:)
very very very well done

best wishes,
saumya

[SyberRose]

thank you and so nice to see you Saumya...hugs

[Saumya]

youre welcome dear....:)
hugs to you too:)

[Baby Ricochet]

mighty beautiful poem miss rose

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Baby...and for peeking in...Rose:)

[icelandicblue]

What a beautiful poem about the dance between day and night. Those last two lines created a bow that tied the entire poem up perfectly.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much and I appreciate you taking time to read tonight...Rose:)