Nudes of Chastity

 

 

 

 How wondrous are the shadows and lunar light?

as they embrace in the wilderness of the dark~

The heartbeat of the wind softly whispers

desiring the Potion of the night~

 

And as mere mortal beings sleep

the passionate gods drink of nectar~

And free spirits of restlessness

become the goddesses of desire~

 

 The nudes of chastity shed inhibitions

within the fragrance of an ambrosial moon~

And entangled are the Aphrodite’s of temptation

behind the veil of the gossamer mist~

 

How wondrous are the shadows and lunar light?

as they embrace in the wilderness of the dark.

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

The nudes of chastity -- such a breathtaking image!

The beauty in the language that you chose is stark and bold; vivid and poignant. My heart is beating with the anticipation of the ideas you have so beautifully painted in words here. I'm fascinated by this piece, and by the way that it was written. Great flow and form.

Suggestion...in the first line "How wondrous (are) the shadows and lunar light" ?

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much and i'm glad you enjoyed Sarah...and thanks for the suggestions.:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A piercing and gratifying piece that needs to handling, well done, good read.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Thomas...and nice to hear from you this evening...:)

[ShelleyA]

Hi Rose. A delightful write about the moon. Enchanting and romantic. Elegant verse. Skillfully crafted free verse which I enjoy. Lovely presentation. Vivid imagery and descriptives. Lovely personification of the shadows, moonlight and the wind. Lovely depth of feeling. Delightfully sensual and at the same time restful. Good word choice as is the use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Shelley...so nice of you to take time and visit tonight...glad you liked this piece...:)

[ShelleyA]

You're very welcome and my pleasure. Have a good night!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

they're doing all that...and here we are, sound asleep...in our own little beds...alone.

dreaming of the moon.

[SyberRose]

haa...yes i'm jealous...thank you so much for visiting Jacob...:)

[Jack...]

Rose, I need some of the tea you are drinking, your poetry always creates such an herbal soothing feeling within me. very calm and peaceful, soft music for the eys and beauty for the heart. Very nice my wonderful friend.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Jack...no tea here ha...glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

Superb writing that flows magically off of the pages and dances in the hearts of the readers...:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Sami for that lovely review...and you have a nice night also...:)

[Sami Khalil]

You too...Welcome...:)

[ron]

Beautifully writen. It made me want to fall in love under the moon light bathed in desire.

[SyberRose]

Thank you for that lovely response Ron...:)

[B-poet]

Lovely picture backed by a wonderfully written & epic poem. Great work SyberRose. One of your best to date. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Bp...appreciate your nice comments as always...Rose:)