A Blue Jean Sky

Painting is called square dance.

The sky is a corn flower blue
It was once a turbulent storm,
but time lasso’s a new day
with a sienna smile
upon the lips of the morn.

Yellows roses promenade
in their skirts of lemonade
as bees in yellow jackets dosey doe.

The sun comes over the mountain
just a dancing in the fountains
skipping like a child in the rain...
In a blue jean sky
the morning taste's of apple pie
as winds strut along like John Wayne. 

©SyberRose

Author's Note

Reviews

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Love how you intricately weave the beauty of nature then add "as winds strut along like John Wayne" Splendid read and write.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Brandon...I think everyone remember's his strut...Rose

[prachi prangya agasti]

descriptions are nice and truly wonderful piece...

[SyberRose]

Thank you Prachi...nice to see you today...Rose

[prachi prangya agasti]

welcome... :)

[Holly Mason]

this is truly wonderful...forgot about the dosey doe's *)
descriptions are great from your lemonade to your John Wayne swagger...just love it
I do not give these words lightly...
thank you for sharing fine lady...John Wayne stuck in my head all day now...spelling will be off but I love Mcklintock...wish I could spell that one but boy was he lookin' sassy in that one *) just sayin'

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Holly...Mcclintock...ha...I looked it up...I lived in Texas when i wrote this so just one of those dosey doe days ha...thanks for peeking in..hugs

[Holly Mason]

thank you for looking it up....I believe I will watch it this weekend...to uuhhhmm think of John Wayne's Blue Jean Sky....*)

[SyberRose]

haa...good.

[s y e]

Rose this is lovely, your last line had me smiling, another lovely write! (:

[SyberRose]

haa...thanks im glad you enjoyed John Wayne's strut ha

[Stella Armour]

i am smiling at the last line Rose...another nice and descriptive poem

[SyberRose]

thank you dear...this is more of a down home poem...wrote it when i lived in Texas...Rose:)

[Mark]

A bright country poem. I love the last line... John Wayne is a personal hero and legend. I can feel the strutting wind. :)

The font is a little distracting. I thought morn was mom at first read.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Mark...i think its italics...Is that what you meant...I usually use another font...the name escapes me at the moment...:)

[Mark]

It could be the italics. the 'r' runs into the 'n'. Makes it look like an 'm'

[SyberRose]

I changed it just for you ha..

[Mark]

aww.. thank you!!!

[Frieda P]

A little something different from your pen, it starts out SyberRose with skies of cornflower blue yet ends with the big guy John Wayne, ha, how imaginative are you? Good one! ;-)

[SyberRose]

Actually I wrote this in Texas...I guess thats where the John Wayne came in to it..haa
Glad you enjoyed Frieda:) and nice to see you this morning.

[Zahra]

beautiful imagery so wonderfuly woven. Great piece

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much for peeking in this morning...:)

[Angi]

Ha! What wonderful characters you have painted in this one. The sky, the whipping, twirling of the lasso, lemonade roses, dancing bees apple pie and John Wayne! Love, love this! Angi~

[SyberRose]

Thank you angi...for peeking in this morning...and i'm really glad you enjoyed...Rose:)

[Einstein Noodle]

uplifting and full of color and scents. from the vast horizon across the seas into the garden and mom's apple pie cooling on the sill. thanks for this wonderful trip!

E.

[SyberRose]

thank you E....you are welcome...and happy you enjoyed this piece...Rose