Whirlpool of Baby Blues

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She can feel the waves of yearning

upon the pinnacle of the crest

as the whirlpool of baby blues

splash softly upon her mind~

 

And whispers of beguiling voice

serenade the serpentine stars~

 

She becomes blinded with insanity

floating aimlessly in mid air

spinning without a parachute

into a net of delectation~

 

While multiple arrhythmic beats

                awaken her

 from a deep and colorless sleep~

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[B-poet]

This a fantastic write. I loved the smooth & tender poetic wording style you used all throughout this well written piece that's backed by a lovely picture. Great work. I'm adding it to my library. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much BP...I liked the painting too as it took me a while to find the perfect one.:)

[Rita L. Sev]

This took me to a very sad place, unlike your usual pieces. I feel that she is depressed, either postpartum or yearning for a child... Well conveyed, though melancholy...

[SyberRose]

Well everyone has their own interpretations...the mystery of poetry haa...thank you Rita:)

[ShelleyA]

Hi Rose. A lovely write about her passionate and alluring dream. You capture beautifully the essence of the artwork with this piece. Well crafted free verse. Lovely flow, tone and depth of feeling. Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on!

[SyberRose]

Thank you shelley so much for taking time to read today...Rose:)

[ShelleyA]

You're welcome Rose. Always a pleasure. Have a greqt day!

[Stella Armour]

oh wow....how dreamy and absolutely gorgeous, you done it again my friend..another lovely write.

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much Stella...happy you enjoyed dear...hugs

[Stella Armour]

you are very welcome Rose.... :o)