Whirlpool of Baby Blues

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She can feel the waves of yearning

upon the pinnacle of the crest

as the whirlpool of baby blues

splash softly upon her mind~

 

And whispers of beguiling voice

serenade the serpentine stars~

 

She becomes blinded with insanity

floating aimlessly in mid air

spinning without a parachute

into a net of delectation~

 

While multiple arrhythmic beats

                awaken her

 from a deep and colorless sleep~

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[SteveB]

"Seranade the serpentine stars". First I am a sucker for alliteration, second I always enjoy precision in language and third you always find the perfect words for whistfulness. I adore that line in particular. A well structured piece with your usual vivid images and delicious sense of the Romantic. Thank you.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Steve...I appreciate your kind words as always...Rose:)

[Elinor Williams]

I love your imagery! Great read :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Elinor...and for peeking in tonight...:)

[one sky]

Great imagery. Nice pic, too. You always have a good choice of words...
with great depth. Bravo!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Margaux...and so glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[NA]

Gorgeous read Rose...you always write so beautifully :) x

[SyberRose]

Thank you Raven...and so nice to hear from you today...Rose:)hugs

[Chris]

I like the taste of this one... it plays well on the tongue.

[SyberRose]

Good morning Chris...i'm glad you like this piece and thanks for peeking in...Rose:)

[Cassie]

Well do i say am getting addicted to reading your poems, Loved the flow of this one

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Cassie...happy you liked enjoyed it...Rose:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i started floating, reading this...aethereal but also so sensual...next to last line...should be "awaken her"

but this as usual for you, has such great visuals and that dreamy feeling most of your writes have.

[SyberRose]

thank you Jacob...i'll edit that...Glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[Zahra]

Beautifully penned. Amazing piece.thanks for sharing

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much...and for peeking in today...Rose

[Sarah Conder]

This poem feels very ethereal and dreamlike; it's lovely :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sarah dear...hugs

[Sami Khalil]

So wonderful of you to pen this great poem using all great words and imagery . The painting is out of this world too...Still peeking when I have a chance...bravo....

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sami for peeking ha...yes i loved the painting too...glad you enjoyed...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)