Heartbeat of Night

In the night, the winds~ sing in the shadows
   The blanket of your love surrounds my soul
     Wind song of night portrays a piccolo
       Serenading as my lonely heart tolls~

The whispering willows graceful branches
   Lazily dance in the lavender breeze
     Consuming thoughts flow like an avalanche
       Seductive thoughts of you begin to please~

Violin of your heart and bow of mine
   Make love together composing our song
     Joined in rhapsody of simply divine
      The strings of your heart is where I belong~

The heartbeat of night~ our love is complete
   I am all yours~ your symphony~ my sweet.

 

©SyberRose

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

When two people make beautiful music together the song is so much sweeter.
You bring me chills with your powerfully romantic work.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Dale for that very nice review...i'm glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Just telling how I feel, you are welcome :)

[NA]

Oh so very beautiful Rose...enjoyed:) x

[SyberRose]

Thank you Raven...nice to hear from you...Rose:)

[ANTO]

The whispering willows graceful branches
Lazily dance in the lavender breeze - beautiful imagery Rose and such a romantic poem. Excellent
(HUG)
X

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Anthony...and thank you for peeking in my window...xo

[ANTO]

Hah - I wish (he said - lowering the tone - AGAINNN - lol) ;)

[Lydia Shutter]

Melodious and pleasing, your words are so romantic! Great flow to your words and good metaphor too. Beautiful presentation. A great package! Lydi**

[SyberRose]

Thank you Lydia...i'm happy you enjoyed...Rose

[Rita L. Sev]

Violin of your heart and bow of mine
Make love together composing our song...

Such a romantic metaphor! I love the visual and auditory images in this piece - lovely as always, Rose!

[SyberRose]

thank you Rita for peeking in today...so nice to hear from you...:)

[Angi]

The photo you paired with this piece is so lovely. You are the queen of romance, Ms. Rose! So sweet. Angi~

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Angi for visiting this morning...:)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Always weave beautiful imagery with your words. Splendid read and write.

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much Brandon for peeking in...:)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

My pleasure, Ms. Rose...:)

[Einstein Noodle]

nice work with the analogy throughout. Also am moved by the pic as well. Interesting choice in the piccolo; not quite as sultry capable as the violin. Your poem moves me today to fall in love again. :)

E.

[SyberRose]

i chose piccolo for the wind song as it rhymed also with shadow ...im happy you enjoyed this piece and im glad it moved you to want to fall in love again too...Rose

[one sky]

Nice one. I like the painting.
This shows a a total surrender to a loved one...
"The heartbeat of night~ our love is complete
I am all yours~ your symphony~ my sweet."

Romantic. Loved it. Bonito!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Margaux...I appreciate your visit today...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Welcome back to the realm of love and passion with a timeless piece . The painting is awesome too...Thank you for letting us peek into your work...:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sami...always nice hearing from you...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)