I Am

For Contest

I am a woman strong and gentle within depths of my soul

I wonder...will i be lonesome for someone to stroll?

I hear lonely whispers in the wind of the night

I see shadows hiding behind the veil of moonlight

I want to be a drummer...not beneath a drummers roll

I am a woman strong and gentle within depths of my soul~

I pretend i do not hurt when my heart is teased

I feel alive within the whispers of the breeze

I touch with my heart...pain and hurt i have tasted 

I worry that my love and passion will be wasted

I cry that someday age and time will take its toll

I am a woman strong and gentle within depths of my soul~

I understand that love must flow freely like the tides

I say let the waves of my feelings be my guide

I dream love and light will shine from within me

I try to make strength and courage the key

I hope someday i find a peace within and feel whole

I am a woman strong and gentle within depths of my soul~

©SyberRose

Author's Note

thank you for reading...contest poem.

Reviews

[ANTO]

This reminded me of the song 'I am I said." by Neil Diamond. Both are powerful testaments to inner strength in the face of adversity.
This is the reintroduction of SyberRose, I feel

(HUGS)
X

[SyberRose]

Thank you Anthony...nice to hear from you as always...xo

[wunder]

~"I hope someday i find a peace within and feel whole
I am a woman strong and gentle within depths of my soul"~
~this poem is so wonderful-you will find all that you
search for in life...i am certain!~ :))

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much James...I appreciate your visit today...Rose:)

[wunder]

~always my pleasure~ :)

[NA]

Bravo...love it...really well done :) x

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Raven..hugs

[Blue Lotus]

truly awsome and enchanting...

I am a woman strong and gentle within depths of my soul
I want to be a drummer...not beneath a drummers roll

I hope someday i find a peace within and feel whole
I am a woman strong and gentle within depths of my soul

Glad I stopped by :)

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Blue...nice to hear from you...:)

[Blue Lotus]

your wlc rosa.. my pleasure :)

[Tate Morgan]

This is really well done you You uniquely start each sentence with an Iand finish each in successive rhymes.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Tate...Rose:)

[Lydia Shutter]

You have described a multifaceted multitasking woman of the world....today's world. Your rhyme and rhythm are flawless. Each line flowed easily into the next. What a wonderful write this is! Lydi**

[SyberRose]

Thank you Lydia..I appreciate your nice comments...Rose:)

[Ken Simm.]

Nice to see Lizzie Sydall up there. This could have been written by her. It is that good.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Ken...i'm glad you liked this Piece...Rose:)

[Diane Lockard]

Love it! The line, "I am a woman, strong and gentle within depths of my soul strikes a chord ...
Descriptions before the lines are beautiful, as always and I am a woman...

Good luck on your contest!

[SyberRose]

Hi Diane...nice of you to drop by today...and thank you so much...hope you have a great day...:)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Amazing poetry. One of the best poems submitted in the contest.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Mehak...I appreciate your kind words...all of them are captivating...:)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Anytime. :)

[ba_mcfarlane]

Your muse is tender and gentle, your heart is at peace, more than most of us, I'd wager. What a soothing read this is. Thank you for sharing.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much for peeking in...I do appreciate your nice comments...Rose:)