Nightingale

The lavender fog swirls like a Juliet rose

while the lunar liquid trickles down

the window of passion~

 

A dusty pink blossom awakens

to the stem of night

 bathing in her glory~

 

And torturous bewitchment of thirst

delights in the whispers of adoration.

 

Melodious strings of your guitar

descend deeply into a wilderness

exploring in a pool of wonderment~

 

 I am your sweet nightingale

your songbird in our Eden of night

as the timbre of my voice serenades~

 

(Your melodious drug of choice)

 

As whispers flow through your pulsating veins

lifting you above the clouds

to an extraordinary planet~

 

An unknown planetary nebula

where desire is our haven~

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[SteveB]

I love the concept of the lover's voice as a drug of choice. A fresh and sharp image.Well done.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Steve...Glad you enjoyed that verse...and thank you for peeking in tonight...Rose:)

[ANTO]

I love that word nebula - I agree with Bpoet - one of your best writings to date - you're on fire.
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[SyberRose]

Awww....thank you Anthony...so glad you enjoyed this piece...Hugss.

[Angi]

You are such a romantic writer, Rose! I could hear the music and the sweet voice singing. Lovely images here. Angi~

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Angi...and so nice hearing from you this morning...Rose...:)

[B-poet]

This is very exquisite and powerfully persuasive. A fine SyberRose masterpiece. Great work. I loved the whole poem. I'm adding this one to my library. One of your best writes to date. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you BP...I'm happy you enjoyed this piece...and thanks for peeking in today...:)

[ShelleyA]

Hi Rose. A beautiful romantic write. Lyrical. Lovely presentation. Skillfully crafted free verse. Good imagery and flow. Very nice metaphor, simile and use of personification which paints a picture of love. Deep expression of emotion. You express the nature of love and romance beautifully in this piece. Well penned. Write on!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Shelley...I appreciate you kind review...thanks for peeking in...Rose:)

[ShelleyA]

You're welcome and my pleasure, Rose. Have a great day!

[Jack...]

Romance, thankfully to you dear Rose, blooms constantly on your pages and in my eyes. Very tender and touching was this poem. Nicely done my friend.

[SyberRose]

Nice of you to stop by Jack...and thank you for your nice comments...glad you enjoyed...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

Captivating words of wonderous imagery and cascading love sentiments. Your poems are a haven for lovers...:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Sami...and so nice of you to peek in today...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

Still peeking...You are welcome...:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Such a lovely cascade of words here - nature imagery at its best, Rose!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Rita...:)