Just When

an oldie

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Just when i think all is gone
a  whisper of you comes along
a thought, sweet and gentle
a smile adorns my face
I  guess my heart loves you
the thought of your embrace

Just when i think all is gone
you enter my mind like a song
maybe just sentimental
my heart starts to race
remembering your hue
my love for you can not erase

Just when i think all is gone
just like egg foo yong
though intercontinental
a blush upon my face
over an ocean of blue
my memory doth trace

Just when i think all is gone
a teardrop slips like a sarong
though the feeling is mental
we entwined, a shoe lace
in love me and you
our memories still interlace

Just when i think all is gone
a bell within sings ding dong
just instrumental
thoughts of you doth grace
a pas de deux
memories arranged in a vase

Just when i think all is gone
you come along...along again

©SyberRose

Author's Note

thank you for reading

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

Memory really never allows anyone to be completely gone... nice imagery in this, Rose.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Rita...it was an oldie...thanks for peeking in tonight:)

[ANTO]

Is a brilliant poem and could be a great song - I can hear Deano working it on Vegas Rose.
"Egg foo yong" - I never thought I'd see that in a poem lolol.
This illustrates your playful side no end
X

[SyberRose]

no Syberdoll was my playful side...this poem was written yearssssssss ago ha....hugs

[ANTO]

Was ... Is .... I never did too well and tenses
X

[SyberRose]

But thank you anyway...im glad you like it Anthony...hugs

[Sarah Conder]

Wonderfully written and very fluid! A perfect expression of indefatigable love.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sarah dear....nice to hear from you this evening...Rose:)

[Blue Lotus]

rose your poetry is so smooth.... that any lover will be grabbed by the collar ... :-)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Blue...and thanks for peeking in ...Rose:)

[Blue Lotus]

my pleasure :-)

[Sami Khalil]

I love the oldies...Ops that is the songs ...:) but I like this oldie poem too . All great lines...:)

[SyberRose]

I dusted it off and took it off the shelf haa..thanks Sami:)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha ...Good stuff ...:)

[quinfinn]

some of these cheerful metaphors are unique and charming. Rose has that joire de vivre in her writing which encompasses our deepest feelings...stellar!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Quin...Glad you enjoyed this littlle oldie i wrote years ago.:)

[quinfinn]

sometimes the oldies are the real goodies

[Anum Khan]

This is beautifully written. A very lovely read.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much ..glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)