Gum,Chips and Cookies

Gum,Chips and Cookies

A Poem by SyberRose
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inspired by Angi's poem...Poet's desk.

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I sit relaxed with my legs stretched 
 upon my gold cranberry and green couch.
The Ace computer on my lap;
my coffee table is next to me
my cookies, my Juicy Fruit gum
and my Tostito lime chips and Diet Coke.

Pillows are under my head
I wait for my muse to join me
and sometimes she stands me up.

A glass stenciled vase
filled with pink lily of the valley
sitting on my square glass top coffee table;
I hear the birds singing outside my back door,
as the squirrels eat the bird food.

My shoes and purse are under the coffee table
a box of tissues sitting on the table 
in case I write a sad poem.
Magazines and a telephone;
And I hope it doesn't ring because if it does
I don't answer it unless it's my mother.

The grandfather clock on the dining room wall
is chiming on the hour.

I can see the gold anniversary clock's pendulum
moving back and forth as it sits across the room.
It is telling me time is passing... get to work.

©SyberRose

© 2013 SyberRose


Author's Note

SyberRose
This is where I write.

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Rose! Thank you so much for showing us where you write! I can picture your warm place so well. This is such a treat for me. Picturing you here when I read your work will add another layer of texture for me. Awesome. What are lime chips? I love citrusy things. Angi~

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Angi

11 Years Ago

Oh geez! I have had those chips! Ha! I was picturing some luxurious new treat. Ha! They are del.. read more
Little Whisper

11 Years Ago

This is a good place to write... very good place... thank you for inviting us in. :)
SyberRose

11 Years Ago

You are welcome little whisper...:)



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These are my favorite poems that are a slice of ordinary life.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Mike...glad you enjoyed it...Rose:)
Interesting write you had presented - descriptive and likely a cozy place.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Ency...and for peeking in...Rose:)
It sounds like a lovely place to write; if you tempt your muse with lime chips and diet coke, who knows what she might bring?
I would like to look out the window at the ocean, or a body of water where I can rest my eyes or wait for my muse...
My great granddaughter is in a summer camp for a week - Mythical Creatures - They talk about unicorns, minotaurs, and make giant's toothpaste, invisibility potions/scientific experiments.. Nice talking to you. Diane

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Diane...nice to see you today as always...Rose:)
Wonderfully descriptive. I enjoyed all of the little subtle touches - the tissues in case you right a sad piece and the noise from the birds outside. Al of the preparations we make for our fickle muse, like preparing for a date. And yet indeed sometimes she stands us up. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Steve...nice to hear from you today as always...Rose:)
You have an interesting mind at work here. So, much going on and brilliance still pours forth. I was distracted at the "cookies." lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

yes birds and squirrels and clocks chiming haa....choc. chip cookies....i forgot to mention ha...tha.. read more
Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

11 Years Ago

Thanks for painting the picture. *looks around for the cookies*
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Sounds idyllic you are lucky

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

I like to be comfortable when I write...thanks Bluely for peeking in:)
I loved Angi's "where I write" poem...such a frenzied piece of deliberate intent. Yours is just as powerful and so starkly different. The imagery you use shows not only a "place", but a feeling as well. Tissues, for the saddness, a clock to spur you forward into your inspirational repose, a pillow to rest your head while you muse on things to come...all beautiful things to show the innerworkings of a poet's mind. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you yes this is my writing place ha...its comfortable...thank you for reading Sarah:)
Nice descriptive piece that provides a calm yet not so calm image of your place to write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

thanks for peeking in AG...appreciate your visit:)
time slips through our fingers if we don't watch out. what a fine way to share your special place. comfort and creativity and a "gold cranberry and green couch." ?
love and peace ms Syber
E.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you E....love and peace to you too...Rose:)
Nice place. And because your title talks a lot about food, I think that's the reason why you are always inspired to write an awesome piece. Lol

Well-penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Yes I could live on it but once in a while I eat real food haa..thank you Margaux:)

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