Tango of the Wind

Once upon a time
                you were in my heart
                                brilliancy within my soul
           shadows within candlelight
                silhouettes upon an easel of a wall


Violins within the music of your voice
                rainbows between your heart and mine
                                shining into the caverns of my eyes
           unmasking an unwilling disguise

                I fell in love and Oh! how I fluttered
                like beautiful wings of a butterfly

Exotic fans in the night danced a tango
                cheek to cheek was the wind and the sky
                                swirling upon a translucent dance floor
                                the skirt in the breeze tangoed by

Our hearts danced, Once upon a time

 

©SyberRose

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

i love faerie tales ..and this reads like on ..so romantic ..soft and woven in nature ..enjoyed reading ..fine feelings of bliss, love drunk, vulnerable falling ;)
E.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

You gave soft words such graceful movement... excellent as usual!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Travis for visiting tonight...I appreciate it...Rose :)

[Onku Ghosh]

Gorgeously lovely !! A befitting title to a romantic poem.Such a descriptive poem that one feels one is present there witnessing you two dancing the tango 'cheek to cheek' Brilliant, Rose!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Onku....i'm so glad you enjoyed this and thank you for peeking in today...Rose:)

[s y e]

Loved the structure of this write and the set out of this write. Amazing as ever, I'm a huge fan, Rose!

~ Noodle.

[SyberRose]

Thank you dear...i'm a fan of your too:)

[Stella Armour]

dashing and gorgeous poetry....

[SyberRose]

Thank you Stella...I appreciate your visit ...I know it is getting to be your bedtime ha...hugss

[ANTO]

cheek to cheek was the wind and the sky

[SyberRose]

thank you Anthony...I sort of like that line too haa...xx

[ANTO]

Nothing like two cheeks in the wind...lol
X

[one sky]

I remember my first dance though it is not a tango...
How sweet memory it is...as always when I remember. With the flow of the music, bodies are swaying, hands are held by each other, and the hearts are beating faster.

This is so...when two hearts are in loved. The heartbeat is like the music which you can only hear. But past is just a memory...of two hearts that danced once upon a time.

Perfect presentation, Rose. I can hear the music and the heartbeats...as well as I can see the moves perfectly.

Estupendo!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Margaux...I remember my first slow dance at twelve at the church hall with a seventeen year old Italian guy named Pat...haa...thank you again:)

[Rita L. Sev]

The memory of the dance of romance... I love the movement you infused into this piece, Rose - It reads like the dance itself.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Rita...a wonderful dance it is :)

[quinfinn]

i was expecting a tango beat to this one, but it did not disappoint. well done!

[SyberRose]

You mean like my gypsy poem haa...thank you quin...Rose:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

One alomsot sways with the wording, well done.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Thomas...nice to see you this morning...at least its morning here ha:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

lol, well it's afternoon here! x

[SyberRose]

What exams did you pass? Congratulations!!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you, I'm doing a Dip in Accoutning Technician

[SyberRose]

Great....what part of Ireland is Wexford in?