Silhouettes
A Poem by
SyberRose
We are silhouettes within satiny branches of a magnolia night; blending contours and curves of seduction~~ Crossing the edge of touch and lips of moonlight, kissing the body of the dark; and soft lashes of ecstasy~~ You trace the cupid of ruby lips tracing with fingertips searching for sweet taste of rapture~~ Your tender whispers swarm my soul magnolia creamy white, inviting velvet eyes and blossom of your kiss~
©SyberRose
© 2013 SyberRose
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Reviews
i could almost smell the magnolia blossoms after a gentle summer rain whilst reading this gorgeous piece . well done!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you Quin...i'm happy you enjoyed it...Rose :) thanks for peeking in.
'Crossing the edge of touch
and lips of moonlight,'
there's something very magical and poetic about flowers. great flow and choice of image, the kind of poem that you want to read twice. fantastic.
Posted 11 Years Ago
'Crossing the edge of touch
and lips of moonlight,'
there's something very magical and poetic about flowers. great flow and choice of image, the kind of poem that you want to read twice. fantastic.
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much for peeking in today...Rose:) I appreciate it.
Great metaphor and gorgeous imagery, Rose!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Great metaphor and gorgeous imagery, Rose!
11 Years Ago
Thank you Rita...nice to hear from you today...Rose
I love Magnolia it is such a sensual flower.. beautiful.. like your poem my friend..
Posted 11 Years Ago
I love Magnolia it is such a sensual flower.. beautiful.. like your poem my friend..
11 Years Ago
Thank you...as i'm writing this i'm watching antique roadshow coming from England.hugs
11 Years Ago
i am too....lol
11 Years Ago
thats funny ...
11 Years Ago
haha... great minds think alike..
11 Years Ago
I looking at the double decker buses
11 Years Ago
oh yes...do you have them as well?
11 Years Ago
sometimes we have open topped ones for celebrations..
Oh Rose. This is a delightful write and lovely presentation. Elegant verse. Romantic and loving. Nice use of metaphor and personification. Lovely depth of feeling. Beautifully executed free verse. Well penned. Write on!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Oh Rose. This is a delightful write and lovely presentation. Elegant verse. Romantic and loving. Nice use of metaphor and personification. Lovely depth of feeling. Beautifully executed free verse. Well penned. Write on!
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much Shelley...I appreciate your sweet comments...Rose:)
11 Years Ago
You're welcome Rose. Have a great day.
This poem has a lovely flow and your choice of words are beautiful, I love the picture of magnolias as well :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
This poem has a lovely flow and your choice of words are beautiful, I love the picture of magnolias as well :)
11 Years Ago
Thank you Sarah dear...hugs
Hey dear, I have loved this one. The flow is excellent.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Hey dear, I have loved this one. The flow is excellent.
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much Cassie...I'm glad you enjoyed it...Rose
So sensual. In the dark, two souls united will be silhouettes with blending contours...
Nice one, Rose.
Posted 11 Years Ago
So sensual. In the dark, two souls united will be silhouettes with blending contours...
Nice one, Rose.
11 Years Ago
thank you Margaux and happy you liked this piece...Rose:)
Beyond beautiful and deeper than the ocean...Thank you for sharing...:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Beyond beautiful and deeper than the ocean...Thank you for sharing...:)
11 Years Ago
Thank you Sami and you are very welcome...Rose:) sweet dreams
11 Years Ago
You too...You are welcome...:)
think you meant "your tender whispers/ swarm my soul"
this is beautiful, Rose...
crossing the edge of touch...and this poem touches me..
nice to get back to poetry..
i like "kissing the body of the dark"---this is soulful and sensual all at once.
jacob
Posted 11 Years Ago
think you meant "your tender whispers/ swarm my soul"
this is beautiful, Rose...
crossing the edge of touch...and this poem touches me..
nice to get back to poetry..
i like "kissing the body of the dark"---this is soulful and sensual all at once.
jacob
11 Years Ago
Yes thanks teacher ha...how did you know what I meant ha...thank you very much Jacob:) I appreciate .. read more Yes thanks teacher ha...how did you know what I meant ha...thank you very much Jacob:) I appreciate that.
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