Cherry on Top

Silly Poem

Sometimes love changes with time
but the love I have for you
still smoothly flows like a rhyme

Sometimes wishes are too much to ask
maybe I don't deserve
but fantasies and memories of past

Life is but a song a dance till the end
than walking away
only looking back now and then

I wanted to share chocolate ice cream
or your favorite vanilla bean
sharing it with you in my dreams

But you always wanted the cherry on top
I felt like a miscellaneous item
in a novelty shop

Love still flows like sweet Hershey syrup
upon rocky mountains of love
sugar and spice and everything nice
and always a double dip of me for you.

 

©SyberRose

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Your words really are clever, especially as you tell a naughty little metaphor with very fine metre; makes it more than technically fine. As romance and feasting goes, this tops the bill! :) 'sugar and spice and everything nice ~ and always a double dip of me for you.'

[SyberRose]

haa...thank you so much...i'm so glad you like it Emma...Rose:)

[emmajoy]

still smiling :)

[Stella Armour]

what could be more romantic than chocolate ice cream with a cherry on top...:o)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Stella...yes it pretty tasty haa ...hugss

[icelandicblue]

This is really great. It's so damn sweet. Nice work.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much...I'm glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[one sky]

Whoa! Nice simile and metaphor.

"But you always wanted the cherry on top
I felt like a miscellaneous item
in a novelty shop"-------- Sometimes we felt we are being treated diffrently than what we expect. But still love prevails. We always give what we can to the persons we love...all the "flavors" which they can enjoy.

I love this unique piece. You're great, Rose.

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much Margaux...I appreciate your visit this evening...Rose:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Sweetness... pun intended... love is about sharing those things that mean the most to us.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Dale for peeking in my window...nice to see you...Rose:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

What can I say? I love the view :)

[ANTO]

I want a Knickerbocker glory and Rose's poems - then I will gladly go to a desert island alone for the rest of my life.
X

[SyberRose]

one knickerblocker glory coming up...you will have to tell me how to make it haa...hugss

[ANTO]

I don't really know my love but I do remember that as a child they towered above me and I didn't know whether to eat it or climb it. (No prizes for guessing which I eventually did lol)
X

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

"sugar and spice and everything nice
and always a double dip of me for you"... Sensual on so many levels, well done. I really enjoyed the tempo of this piece.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Travis...I appreciate your visit today...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

You make us hungry for your poems and those delights...Well done as always...:)

[SyberRose]

It did look tempting haa...thanks Sami.:)

[Sami Khalil]

It is indeed...You are welcome...:)