Summer Rain

Summer Rain

A Poem by SyberRose



May I wear you in the night like a gossamer gown?

drifting within rising tides of your eyes~

As I lay my head upon the shoulder of a dream

bursting with hope at the seams ~

While we walk together 
 in the summer rain~


Like barefoot lovers ~ melting upon pavements

Steamy pavements of love.

 

©SyberRose




 

© 2013 SyberRose


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oh you have done it yet again Rose.. just so dreamy and gorgeous..

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear...I'm glad you like it...Hugss
when we are together the rain hits the sidewalk as we stroll side by side, and there is steam...not just passion kind, but the steaminess of a very strong bond, strong love.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob for peeking in as always...Rose:)
Hi Rose. A lovely write that's romantic and delightfully sensual. Well crafted free verse that is short, concise and succinct. You paint a vivid picture of love on a rainy day. Nice use of simile. Excellent word picture in the last two lines. Well penned. Write on!

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Shelley...and thank you again for taking time to comment...Rose:)
ShelleyA

11 Years Ago

You're welcome Rose.
AWE... such a gentle nature combined with pure romance makes for a euphoric combination.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much Dale...and for peeking in today...glad you liked this piece...Rose:)
The queen of romance . The feminine version of Jack...Awesome...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Yes so true haa...thanks again Sami...:)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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Added on July 6, 2013
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SyberRose
SyberRose

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Welcome to my profile: I was born in England, and raised in the U.S and now living in Virginia. I write mostly of romance and nature....I prefer not to send read requests so if you wish just read at y.. more..

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