Language of the Body

His eyes dance like black hollyhocks

within the breeze of his smile;

Delectable skin of tawny sands

glistening like the River Nile~

The language of poetry

"Come body surf with me"

Upon waves of passion

flowing with ecstasy~

The sunset of his lips

umbrella mine from the sun;

Bathing within his ambiance

until our surfing is done~

His body utters poetry

"Come body surf with me."

 

©SyberRose

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Ency Bearis]

Great poem and probable I'll try surf then .

[SyberRose]

Thank you Ency...glad you enjoyed it...Rose:)

[Blue Lotus]

Ulala!
"Come body surf with me"
Upon waves of passion

Makes me want to go to the beach right now hehe
No really great great poetry!

[SyberRose]

haa...yes it does...thanks for peeking in Blue...I appreciate it:)

[Blue Lotus]

:-) ......

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem my friend. The painting and amazing description took me to good places and thoughts.
"Come body surf with me"
Upon waves of passion
flowing with ecstasy~"
Ocean can lead us to warm and sweet places. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Coyote...summer time brings out the body surfers haa...:)

[Stella Armour]

"body surf" i like that idea .. great work as always my friend

[SyberRose]

You can tell its summer time haa...thank you dear.

[Stella Armour]

and i love that painting too...........

[quinfinn]

body surfing? well, that is certainly a new moniker for my vocabulary...i like this, very much!

[SyberRose]

Thank you...sounds good to me too haa

[quinfinn]

always welcome

[QuietlyCrash]

Ooh steamy but beautiful lovely write, Rose :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you again for peeking in tonight...I appreciate it...:)

[Cassie]

Another one of Roses great talent. good one

[SyberRose]

Thank you...glad you enjoyed Cassie...hugs

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Beautifully written, Ms. Rose...Splendid!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Brandon...Rose:)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

The Fantastic Rose, strikes again! "Come body surf with me."

[SyberRose]

Thank you Travis..haa...its summer time again.:)

[Sami Khalil]

The title , the imagery , the calling to the beloved are all enchanting and marvelous...Thank you for sharing...:)

[SyberRose]

thank you Sami...and you are welcome...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)