Language of the Body

His eyes dance like black hollyhocks

within the breeze of his smile;

Delectable skin of tawny sands

glistening like the River Nile~

The language of poetry

"Come body surf with me"

Upon waves of passion

flowing with ecstasy~

The sunset of his lips

umbrella mine from the sun;

Bathing within his ambiance

until our surfing is done~

His body utters poetry

"Come body surf with me."

 

©SyberRose

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

oh so romantic and graceful ...just the right sensual woven in your surfing ..and black hollyhocks ..such a deeply magnificent flower .. loved reading this jone Ms. Rose
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[Onku Ghosh]

I forgot to mention- the paintihg is too good!!!

[SyberRose]

Yes it is pretty...glad you like it:)

[Onku Ghosh]

A lovely poem full of passion......" come body surf with me".......

[SyberRose]

Thank you Onku...so nice of you to visit today...Rose:)

[SteveB]

So many great lines but the "body surf with me" is a classic. Very well done!

[SyberRose]

thank you so much for taking time to read my poems tonight Steve...Rose:)

[s y e]

The sunset of his lips
umbrella mine from the sun;

Woo, you rock, Rose! Another awesome blossom write!

~ Noodle.

[SyberRose]

thank you so much dear...hugss...im happy you liked this piece...:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

My, My, My - how the Rose hides it's thorns for those readers searching, well done!

[SyberRose]

haa...thats funny...I'm happy you enjoyed this body surfing piece Thomas.:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Great work Rose, with pictures and wonderful poetry :)
- Singh :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Singh so much for visiting today...Rose:)

[Vikrantsingh]

My Pleasure :)

[Saphia Louise]

Nice piece. I really loved this:

"The sunset of his lips
umbrella mine from the sun;"

Great.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Saphia...I appreciate your visit...Rose:)

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the way you use nature to describe features and emotions. This is creatively brilliant.

[SyberRose]

Thank you PB...and i'm glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[Poetic Beauty]

you are more than welcome. It makes you drift into the setting of two lovers engrossed in each others light.

[Soma-ko]

Oh the soothing cool waters of the ocean that have yet to be warmed by the sun that presses on wards, and the amazing experience of being at this animated scene with a loved one or admirer just makes the moment more enticing. Hot yet cool write, and much enjoyed. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much for that nice review dear Soma...Rose:)