Wolf Winds

Can you feel the wolf winds panting in the night?

As they howl beneath the pale moonlight~

 

Do you know they can hear each moan and cry?

In valleys and mountains each luscious sigh~

 

They can smell the passion of the abyss

As they stalk within each tender kiss~

 

Can you feel the winds whisper in your hair?

Breathing down your neck...when no one is there~

 

Can you hear the shadows as they embark?

In  the desert...in mask of the dark~

 

Within the black forest and silhouettes of the night

Tasting the potion of addicting moonlight~

 

©SyberRose

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

This is a lovely piece, Rose.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Travis...glad you liked it...:)

[Stella Armour]

wow i love that picture and it so suits the poem Rose....haunting and wonderful..

[SyberRose]

Thank you Stella...i'm glad you like it...I like that photo too...hugs

[Rita L. Sev]

Shivers up my spine reading this, Rose. Well written couplets with great imagery and a vivid eeriness.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Rita...nice hearing from you today as always...Rose:)

[Onku Ghosh]

Your fascination for the moon...... is becoming addictive.Lovely poem, well-rhymed.Just the mention of wolves howling at night gives one an eerie feeling.You have successfully created a haunting atmosphere in the poem by your good use of imagery.A very good write, as always

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Onku...Yes the moon has me spellbound...Rose:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

another beautiful fusion of nature and human behavior...the wolves are beautiful in their mating and how they all move together in packs...humans are also beautiful when they act upon their passions...and most of all when they travel together...in groups...

today so many individuals are compartmentalized...we seem to have lost that group mentality...we don't get together for causes like we used to..

wolves remind us there is strength in numbers.

wow, you really hit buttons with this one.
nice couplets...

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Jacob...I like my poetry group...its the only group I belong to ha...Rose:)

[Zahra]

Beautiful rhyming, I liked the imagery and concept a lot, I like wolves.:) Very nice rose!

[SyberRose]

I'm glad you like it ...thank you for taking time to read today...Rose:)

[Just Kim]

Such a amazing haunting write,
Love the rhythm of this piece as well.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sprinkles...I appreciate you visit...Rose:)

[Just Kim]

You are welcome : )

[ShelleyA]

Hi Rose. A beautiful write, eerie and haunting. A good interpretation of the image. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming couplets which I enjoy. Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of these wolf winds that any reader can appreciate and almost hear being carried though the air on a dark night. Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Nice personification of the winds -- being the panting of wolves. Very creative. Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme. A nice mix of perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Good depth of feeling of the darkness and its whispers that haunt the night. Good word choice; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice use of onomatopoeia. I like how you use questions to drive the theme of the couplets. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on!

[SyberRose]

Wow ..what a great review Shelley...I'm so glad you enjoyed it...and thank you for taking time to read and comment as I really do appreciate it...Rose:)

[ShelleyA]

You're very welcome and my pleasure.

[SyberRose]

I did have the script fonts on here but they disappeared...maybe they will return as they did the other day...quite eerie ha..

[Jack...]

Very haunting and mesmerizing. The wolf is a very mysterious creature, with enough human traits to make it really scary. You have captured this feeling well in your wonderful words, Rose. Very nice.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Jack...yes they are indeed...they love the moon just like we do...:)